TITLE: Undesirable (A vampire novel)
RATING: NC-17 (This chapter PG-13)
GENRE: Porn with plot -- heavy on the plot. Action/adventure, some black humor, some romance.
PAIRINGS: George x everyone. Mostly Slash, some het, three and moresomes. Vampire sex.
WARNINGS: (this chapter) none.
WORD COUNT: 5318
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But gods woman, you've got my heart in my throat the entire time. All throughout the entire piece I kept thinking, George, you've had it now...
But then vampire magic can't work over the phone, just like tone and everything is lost through electronic media and gods I was so honestly glad for George.
And then there's random tidbits of information and George got away from the airport and...
Fuck Stan. Stan knows something. Is it because he's just an arrogant smug son of a bitch and George is jumpy (and therefore we have to be since it's his POV) or is it because Stan knows?
I'm biting my lip the entire time, my heart pounding with each paragraph, and you ended it with a cliffhanger, damn!
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I'm really glad that the tension keeps up. It's my goal to keep everyone on edge for the next chapter until I finish this.
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This is awesome. I sort of like Lord Jeffrey. Don't know why. Anyhow, brilliant, as always! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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I so want him to get away-- poor little mite! I know it's not going to happen, and I'm surprised at myself for wanting it, but what an awful situation he's in!
I die til there is more!
*stabs a Stan voodoo plushie*
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I'm glad you want him to get away, because if you didn't he wouldn't be that sympathetic. But of course, it's no fun if he gets away, because punishing George is way too much fun.
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I wonder what Lord Jeffrey's orientation was supposed to have been like? It seems that George was almost persuaded by him, even without the influence of his mind control.
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From Stan's POV life isn't bad. Of course, he's not even part-time harem, he's just one of the grounds keepers.
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Actually, it would have probably been a "Hi, welcome to the cult club, here are the perks, here are the duties, here's where you live, here's a shoulder to cry on for a while." Would it have worked? Knowing George, probably not. George's parents could have told Jeffrey that he's got a pretty tough stubborn streak. They could have also told him that George was almost 4 before he finally potty trained.
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