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velvet_mace

Undesirable Chapter 7

Nov 12, 2008 12:04

TITLE: Undesirable (A vampire novel)
RATING: NC-17 (This chapter PG-13)
GENRE: Porn with plot -- heavy on the plot. Action/adventure, some black humor, some romance.
PAIRINGS: George x everyone. Mostly Slash, some het, three and moresomes. Vampire sex.
WARNINGS: (this chapter) none.
WORD COUNT: 4246

( Chapter 7 )

original, undesirable

Comments 22

tashasaphi November 13 2008, 01:27:31 UTC

CLIFFFFHAAANGEEEERR

What a doozy! Lovely! I die till there is more!

velvet_mace November 13 2008, 08:20:41 UTC

Heh, you may have to wait until the end of the story for there not to be a cliffhanger.

allykatb November 13 2008, 03:30:06 UTC

I literally squeed when I saw this. Luckily I sent this to two of my friends, so we can fangirl over your awesome work.

velvet_mace November 13 2008, 08:20:58 UTC

Aw sweet!

trustingfrndshp November 13 2008, 04:33:46 UTC

Decided to drop in again from aff.net and saw that you're posting here now too! George was sooo close... hmmm, can they trace his calls-if not maybe he can still get some distance; kinda thought Wally should help more but I get about not wanting to get in trouble, maybe George should have let him tell his parents so they can get a heads up too... the "escape" has been fun so far; thanks for the update!

velvet_mace November 13 2008, 07:22:57 UTC

Thanks!

Don't count George out quite yet. Even vampires have their limitations.

Don't count Wally out, either. He really hasn't had any opportunity to help yet (that email that George was perfectly capable of making himself non-withstanding).

arkanefyre November 13 2008, 16:29:45 UTC

I adore Wally too, wussy Wally. *pets*

I really like this AU you've built up. I was half itching to google for Lord Fancy Trousers when I realized, oh, right, AU, not irl.

I wonder if George's original patron won't hesitate to take him back. He is, after all, a commodity, right? Lady Dingaling might be in a bit of trouble though...

Anyhow, can't wait for the next part!

velvet_mace November 13 2008, 16:49:15 UTC

Not to give anything away, but yeah, Lady Dingaling is not going to be very happy soon.

As for George's mysterious original patron -- he does come into this, but it takes a long while.

orion117 November 13 2008, 21:16:39 UTC

Poor George is going nowhere fast. This is a very interesting universe you've concocted.