Undesireable: Chapter 2

[velvet_mace]

TITLE: Undesireable (An original vampire novel)
RATING: NC-17 (This chapter PG-13)
GENRE: Porn with plot -- heavy on the plot. Action/adventure, some black humor, some romance.
PAIRINGS: George x everyone. Mostly Slash, some het, three and moresomes. Vampire sex.
WARNINGS: Lots of non-con and coercive themes -- oh howdy Lots of swearing.

Comments

[iscatian]

Can you say eff-reakin' HILARIOUS?

Yes, yes you can. Very much so.

"Wally's got apples and cinnamon and sugar, etc, and that makes a nice pie - common, but pretty much universally yummy. Me? I'm made up those weird looking fruits and vegetables you see in Asian markets. I have "acquired taste" written all over my numbers." I die. XD Seriously, "universally yummy"? What genius is this? Also, really like the taste 'n' numbers concept. Unique AND funny, could one ask for more? (well, yes, no bondage etc, but that hasn't happened yet, so...)

[velvet_mace]

Thanks!

[anonymous]

This is brilliant!

was a bit wary of the whole vampire thing post-Twilight (save me!), but came highly reccomended by a comment on Freece's livejournal (check hir out - good slash), and it's great.

I really like the humour, and the not completely implausible setup, and really like the way you build up characters that are multidimensional and interesting, not just eyecandy.

Well done!

[velvet_mace]

Thank you!

My whole premise was to figure out how modern society could logically function if vampires were real. This is where it lead me.

[eternityras]

wow, a lot of info is clicking into place. this is going to get interesting!

[velvet_mace]

The awkward thing is that this is one of only two flash backs, but there really was no way to get this info in without a flashback. Otherwise it came out as a real info dump, but the info is necessary to understand what's coming.

[meganeko_mausuu]

Found this via one of my friends on twitter- so far, I'm thoroughly amused.