Older fic -- DESCENT INTO HELL

[velvet_mace]

This was my first toe into the world of lemons (it really is only a lime though), non-con and pederasty. Boy when I do something, I go all the way don't I?

Anyway, it came wholy out of watching FMA episode 7, where Ed faints at a crime scene and wakes up naked in bed, his hair down with Tucker right next to him reading a book. I was like -- Fan

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[mikkeneko]

Think you mean "descent" :)

[velvet_mace]

Spelling = poo.

Fixed...again.

Ya know I had to do that on FF.Net as well.

[scico]

Shou once again found himself blinking at the ambiguity of the Armor.

the Armor. *sil* ...omg, just had an icon idea. velvet, you're a genius! ^_^

*cough*

anyways... Ed's been violated!! And doesnt even know it! *though perhaps he has a feeling of being dirty, but doesnt know why... or even he finds out, which adds to the rage of beating the crap out of Tucker* ;)

though I thought that Tucker knew Al to be empty at their first meeting? Because Mustang said their condition would be explained, or something like that? o.O anyways...

heh, Al a menace? ... Alphonse the menace... heh heh heh... another icon idea! I love you! ;)

[velvet_mace]

Oh yeah, I wrote this long time ago. Weeks ago. Ok, Fix that, too.

Actually Ed never knows this one. Blessed ignorance due to drugs. But you'd think he'd wonder why the heck he's nakkid. I always wondered why he didn't IN CANON.

In canon there is also a story (though I won't write it probably) about how Ed gets dressed and his hair braided and is able to get down the stairs to see Basque Gran BEFORE Tucker (who is already dressed). You'd think Tucker would be more interested in seeing whose barged into his house than he would be to watch Ed's lightning fast dressing and grooming skills.

[scico]

heh.

blessed ignorance indeed. hmm... maybe because hes used to waking up naked in other peoples beds? no wait..... ;)

yes, one would think. *shrug* though if the fanbase is any indication, Tucker WOULD be more interested in Ed. =P

[sky_dark]

I've read this before!

[velvet_mace]

Yep. It's been on FF.Net for a long time. It be old.

Also I spammed Demidevi with it, so you might have read it there.

But I haven't put it up on my lj yet, so here it is. In all it's oldness.

Actually, I feel oddly fond of this fic, since I remember at the time I was so aghast at myself for writing it. I was so sweetly innocent... back so long ago... in April. When I was only 38.

[andarton]

wow.. excellent job on this. I like the way you portrayed the thought processes that led up to Ed molestation. I actually wondered about that scene too.. but I guess you saw more in it than I did. XD

[tir_synni]

XD And this was what helped completely ruin every Tucker scene for me. After reading this, what was once an insane freak became a pedophilic (sp) insane freak. *snickers* And I still adore it.