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velvet_mace

Fics spam 4

Jan 19, 2007 11:47

Title: Contest
Rating: PG
Pairing: Implied Hei/Ed, implied Elricest.

A/N: For those who are familiar with table-top RP's, the best phrase to discribe this fic is "critical failure" -- not quite as bad as including all a person's squicks in a secret santa exchange, and then telling them their OTP sucks but still massive poor judgement ( Read more... )

fma: hei, fma: ed, rated: pg, fic, fma: al

Comments 3

cryogenia January 20 2007, 01:16:28 UTC

To be honest? I think it works well enough until the end. The end does in fact sting :) But I really, really like Hei's observation's about Amestris, about Ed's obliviousness, and really, the only problem I have with this fic is that the two of them think they can fight over Ed. If Ed really is his own person, he should step in and gnaw on them both for that and then have a threesome XD

velvet_mace January 20 2007, 01:23:09 UTC

The end does sting. Actually the end is a flipping slap in the face of anyone who likes Elricest. How I could possibly not realize that when I wrote it is beyond me.

And yes this situation deserves Ed's attention, who will probably tell them both to grow the hell up, because this is pure stupid mutual jealousy.

cryogenia January 20 2007, 01:46:03 UTC

I dunno, how I could have not realized that Hei calling Roy "Edward" in bed was undermining the Roy/Hei fic :) Sometimes, I think brains go on vacation without posting notice to the rest of the body XD