Fic: Softness

[velvet_mace]

TITLE: Softness
PAIRING: Lust x Tucker
RATING: NC-17
WARNINGS: Non-con, bondage, toys, fem-domination.
BETA: taisa_flames

Comments

[anat_astarte]

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH I lovedddddd how Shou 'escaped' her.

[velvet_mace]

Thank you! Yes, he found a way to make himself immune. Kinda a high price though.

[anat_astarte]

You're welcome! Yes it was a high price, but it was absolutely ingenious!!!

[ipitydaf00l]

Omg...that was wonderful.

[velvet_mace]

Thank you! The pacing was a bit off, but right now I'm just happy I was able to write ANYTHING.

[ipitydaf00l]

Well, I'm happy that you were able to write something. XD I was complaining to _jeshide_ last night that each time I try to write something involving Roy/Al it turns out rather depressing. (I'm not counting the crack genderswitching thing I put on hold probably forever.)

I was curious by having Lust/Shou, and decided to take a peek even though normally the idea of Shou being involved in anything makes me want to gag. However, I feel you pulled it off wonderfully, especially when you described how he managed to escape Lust's ....well lust. XD

[maxxim_huzzah]

Ohh, that was cruel. I love how you were able to spotlight what made Shou fail so much at his alchemy. "But no one asked --"

"You are being punished for failure of imagination. You should have thought these up on your own." What pr0n teaches me about life!

Your writing helps me see the other characters, especially minor ones like Tucker, in a new way. Thank you. :3

[maxxim_huzzah]

One little crit: and there was indeed no way to reverse the it. 'To reverse it'.

[velvet_mace]

Got it! Thanks

[velvet_mace]

Poor Shou, he was asked to do the impossible, making a human-intelligent chimera without using a human, and it broke him. Here again Lust is setting him up to fail, because she likes punishing him more than rewarding him.

I think the life lesson is, it sucks to have a bad boss.

[wired_lizard]

..........XXXDDDDDDD

The joys of having internet access--I get to wake up to Velsmut again!

Poor Lust, poor dear Lust, getting so few toys. And...well, Tucker being, inadvertantly, one of my pet characters, it makes me so very happy to see somebody else write him so well, and in such a context--you ventured far deeper into the fellow's sexuality than I ever did. And it's so well-done overall. :)

Rarepair love! <3

[velvet_mace]

Yea!

I didn't hardly even TOUCH on poor Shou -- this was mostly a look into Lust. You hardly ventured into his sexuality at all, so of course I went farther. He's lazy and he likes his sex quick and easy and painless, and Lust never was able to get him to change his mind about that.

[jantra]

Wow, that was good. o.o;

God Shou, you're a dumbass. You had everything you could have wanted for as little as you had... *shakes head*

[velvet_mace]

I think Lust's sexuality scared him a bit.