OOOOOPSIE Try again Armstrong/Havoc Smut

[velvet_mace]

Sorry about that. In my fumbling and kid distractedness I eraced the wrong entry. Here is the story (which thank goodness I had written somewhere else, or I would be a very sorry camper about now.) This was written as a challenge from Ezra. I'm kind of proud of myself for being able to do it. Hopefully, it fit's the bill.

Comments

wow

[anonymous]

Hey that was amazing... i thought the reason why no one could do it was becuase it would be too hard to keep Armstrongs personality but you did it wonderfully! I am truely amazed. It was fantastic. i have book marked you live journal now... i will start reading your earlier works now. Thanks again! -Ezra

Re: wow

[velvet_mace]

Trust me, this was tough. It took me a while to figure out how I was going to do it.

[mistr3ssquickly]

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I feel guilty saying that this was really good. It's so.....so....SQUICKY!!!!!

But at the same time, SO well written! And so cute! I can imagine Armstrong would be very gentle, and think you did well at keeping him in character. Havoc seems like the shy uke, the sad man who needs a lover. The story overall was very sad and sweet, and beautiful.

I'm very glad I read this :)

[velvet_mace]

I think ANYONE paired with Armstrong would be a shy uke... actually the hard part was keeping him from being a completely unwilling, screaming and running away uke. I truly feel sorry for Havoc, but someone had to take one for the team.

[mistr3ssquickly]

You know, this is really one of my favorite fma fanfictions out there. I read it whenever i'm depressed because it's warm and loving and funny, and makes me feel all WAFFy inside. Which is weird, because it's Armstrong, but you just really pulled this story off with beauty and finesse.

Just thought you should know. Thank you for writing this!

[magegirl8]

OMG YOUR FIC SPARKLES!!!!! it was hot. i didn't think i could appreciate an Armstrong fic so much, but i loved it. i even think a sequel would be nice... yes, you met the challenge brilliantly.

[velvet_mace]

Thanks! OMG a sequel! There's a compliment. Armstrong is just such a crack personality, I figured that most of you would be sporking your eyes before the end of the fic. I don't think I can pull it off though, except if I .... hmmm.

[kojirokat]

Armstrong tends to scare me sometimes..but I'm glad I read this. You really zeroed in on Armstrong's character.

[velvet_mace]

Armstrong scares everyone. Including me.

[climbatize]

Y'know, when I clicked on the link to this fic I honestly thought I wasn't going to like it at all, because before a few minutes ago I couldn't imagine Armstrong in a relationship with anyone.

But this fic worked, and worked beautifully. ^_^ I think I actually like this pairing now O.o;;

..I love how oblivious Mustang is, and the constant references to the Armstrong family, especially the library. XD

Good job. ^^ And keep up the good work.

[velvet_mace]

Heh heh heh. I couldn't imagine Armstrong in a relationship with anyone either -- until I wrote this.