Pawns Chapter 23

[velvet_mace]

Comments

[hime1999]

You killed me. In a good way. Very much love to you and your Roy. And your Al too. And Midnight. And... argh, everyone! XD;;;

[bard_linn]

Oh, really good chapter. I like how Roy makes himself "earn his worship". Also the details on Ed's abilities. Great chapter!

*cries*

[scico]

Oh please write, write, write.

And no, you don't have any other life besides this, because I am ordering you to do this and only this, without food or sleep or anything!!!

;)

I really really love your Al!

The whole array business is just wrong... *shudders*

[sky_dark]

The way you detail out Ed's alchemy is astounding, I don't think I've seen it worded quite so understandably before. God Midnight keeps growing on me, and Al's sheer brilliance. This work is just incredible Velvet, please keep us on teetherhooks =)

[mikkeneko]

Al is so clever. <3 I can see why Roy wanted to keep things superficial, but wow, Al really knows how to work it. ^^;