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One of the things I really fell down on these past few months was my writing. I ended up not writing two of my springkink prompts. I will, though. I won't leave that unfinished. It's just that between working 30-40 hours a week, my dad's death, moving out of my dad's into my mom's, and then from my mom's into the condo, not having a computer,
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I admit I hadn't considered the domestic problems Muraki would probably find himself in with Sagadalius hanging out in his head, and of course you've exploited the comedic potential like WHOA.
I especially liked: "Sir, I’ll have to ask you not to talk to yourself while in the restaurant. You’re frightening the other patrons."
At least they share some common ground. XD
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I think that may be my new favorite phrase.
I considered the logistics of having a demon in one's head, and I'm not sure my scenario is the most likely. It's makes sense that there would be two-way mental communication. BUT THAT WOULD NOT HAVE BEEN FUNNY, so I ditched it.
At least they share some common ground. XD
It's make up murder!
"I'm sorry I snapped. I've been having a hard time lately."
"It's fine. I should have been more considerate. Would you like to disembowel that group of tourists over there?"
"You say the nicest things."
...There's something deeply wrong with my mind, isn't there?
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I L U. ♥
Seriously, thanks so much! I love it! ^__^
When I first saw it on my flist I was just giggling and repeating 'oh my god' while grinning like a maniac. XD
“As I have already explained,” Muraki said softly, only a hint of annoyance in voice, “I am planning on meeting several of my contacts within the next few days. They are powerful, well connected, and I am blackmailing them all. It can’t go wrong.”
And there were some fabulous lines. Like this one. XD
Thankyou again~~ I'm so touched. ^^
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