Comments | veleda_k: Utena fic- Through the Wicked Winding Streets of My World

veleda_k

Utena fic- Through the Wicked Winding Streets of My World

Jul 08, 2007 10:17

Title: Through the Wicked Winding Streets of My World
Fandom: Shoujo Kakumei Utena
Pairing: Akio/Touga
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: Semi-graphic sex.
Summary: Akio and the newly appointed student council president go for a little drive.
A/N: This was written for springkink. The prompt was : "Akio/Touga: Cars or other vehicles - "there's no brake here, only ( Read more... )

fanfiction: shoujo kakumei utena, anime, fanfiction, shoujo kakumei utena

Comments 11

bitterfig July 8 2007, 16:29:44 UTC

I really like this, so deft at capturing Touga's arrogance but also how his hunger for power and prestige makes him easy to seduce. Really good.

veleda_k July 8 2007, 16:42:05 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting!

capturing Touga's arrogance but also how his hunger for power and prestige makes him easy to seduce

Yes! That's exactly what I was going for. Great to know that I got that across.

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veleda_k July 8 2007, 22:18:00 UTC

Thank you!

I've never written Touga before, so it's great to hear that you think I got him right.

nevacaruso July 8 2007, 23:26:53 UTC

You did a terrific job of getting into Touga's head here. I particularly liked his thoughts on his classmates at the beginning, and the car ride was sexy, surreal, and true to both characters.

veleda_k July 9 2007, 03:24:03 UTC

Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked the story.

Surreal was exactly what I was going for with the car ride, so it's really good to know that you think it worked.

jmie July 11 2007, 14:29:59 UTC

There so needs to be more current and good Utena fiction such as this.

"More adult road;" I love it. It's perfect for Akio's shady activities concerning the council memers and "teaching" them so much.

spiritwolfkiros January 22 2008, 06:26:19 UTC

People have already said this, but I'm repeating it: Absolutely brilliant job of capturing the characters. Everything flowed together well, and the read was flowing and flawless.

I have to say my favorite line was "The chairman's smile had teeth." It threw me SUCH powerful imagery, and it was SO Akio.

Throwing Touga's thoughts in there on the other student council members was ingenious. It got me into Touga mode and set me up for the rest of the story.

All in all, great write. I love all your fiction, but I find this one exceptional.