*blink* Wow. I like that one. Very simple, yet it gets its point across. And none of that meandering comma symbolization or anything.
... On a side note, I really like the "they are always poking at things" line, and not on a poetry level. More on a 'that sounds like something you or I would say' level. 'Cept for the "cut off your hands" part. That part didn't much sound like us.
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... On a side note, I really like the "they are always poking at things" line, and not on a poetry level. More on a 'that sounds like something you or I would say' level. 'Cept for the "cut off your hands" part. That part didn't much sound like us.
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What, you don't think that the third period in the second stanza has DEEP, SYMBOLIC MEANING?
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That is awesome. But disturbing. But awesome. <3
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