Comments | veleda_k: The internet is for porn!

veleda_k

The internet is for porn!

Feb 12, 2007 19:41

I have several (hopefully interesting) posts in my head, but I'm too sleepy to write them up. Yeah, it's not even 8:00 and I'm exhausted ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fanfiction: yami no matsuei, yami no matsuei

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ravenbell February 13 2007, 05:11:34 UTC

Hey Vel! I really enjoyed this. Watari and Tsuzuki are so cute together, and Watari's inner monologue throughout the story had me in stitches.

And boa constrictor... caramel corn... multitasting... lumpy!Tsuzuki... eeeee!! XD

I'm also absolutely convinced that you are way better at the porn than I am. So. Hot.

veleda_k February 13 2007, 06:04:45 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I had no idea how fun these two would be until I started writing them.

I'm also absolutely convinced that you are way better at the porn than I am.

I'm going to have to vehemently disagree. :P But I'm very, very glad you found it hot, because I was convinced that it just sounded silly. I think the problem may be that I am simply unable to find my own writing hot. I'm too busy thinking about word choice, trying to figure out if what I'm writing is physically possible, and "Pants. They should come off."

Maybe you have a similar problem?

ravenbell February 13 2007, 06:24:45 UTC

Oh, absolutely. It's constantly a matter of - "Can I possibly get away with one more euphemism here or do I just call it a penis and get this over with?" I've come to the conclusion that sex is simply not as hot or interesting as everything that leads up to it or is going on around it.

And as I understand it, the majority of the male population VEHEMENTLY DISAGREES.

Eh. Sex is weird. :P

kurenai_tenka February 13 2007, 15:00:02 UTC

And as I understand it, the majority of the male population VEHEMENTLY DISAGREES.

*snark* Sounds about right. XD

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kurenai_tenka February 13 2007, 14:58:14 UTC

It's too early in the day for porn. Bad me.

Haha, I really liked it! You can write porn, so no saying otherwise please. XD

Also loved the random humour, it has convinced me that there needs to be more Tsuzuki/Watari drunken!fics. Be it sex or anythign else ♥

Great to read something thats practically never done! ♥

veleda_k February 15 2007, 03:56:58 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

Tsuzuki and Watari are just adorable. Why isn't there more written for them, that's what I want to know.

kurenai_tenka February 15 2007, 18:23:55 UTC

It suprises me too, seems a pretty obvious one too. I think it's just that other pairings over shadow it or something ._.

There isn't even so much fic with them interacting...it's really odd....

osmalic February 13 2007, 15:57:01 UTC

Oh yay, Watari/Tsuzuki! And what hit me the most about this was that even after having sex, Watari and Tsuzuki still slept on different places--without being awkward. That's a level of understanding that speaks a lot. Thanks for sharing.

7veilsphaedra February 14 2007, 02:07:32 UTC

Funniest line, "I didn't know you were into dogs."

Mmm, love Watari-smut and adore the muzzy ending. So much for clearheadedness.

Good job.

wordsofastory February 18 2007, 00:25:41 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad I remembered to come back and read this. It's really a fun story; I like how casual Tsuzuki and Watari are with each other. And also very hot! Good job.