Fic: Cryobiosis, part 2/3

[veldeia]

Title: Cryobiosis
Author: Veldeia
Fandom: Iron Man movieverse
Characters: Tony, Jarvis, Rhodey, Pepper. Gen, friendship.
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Disclaimer: I own no one and nothing, except for a messed up mind that likes playing with other people's characters and universes.
Summary: A mission gone wrong leaves Iron Man stranded in the middle of

Comments

[amonitrate]

hey, nice depiction of the confusion of shock and hypothermia. Poor Tony.

[veldeia]

Yay, thanks. I had far too much fun writing it. Poor Tony, indeed - the things I do to the characters I love...

[eumelia]

Oh, how I love your Jarvis... and it's quite creepy how much like HAL you made him, though without the whole logical fallacy going on.

And Ach! Hypothermia!Tony *wibble* I was getting shivers myself.

Looking forward to the conclusion.

[veldeia]

Hm, funny how people always think my Jarvis(es, all different versions of him) are creepy when I never really see him that way. :D Not that it's a bad thing, I think it's cool if he's creepy... Uh, "cool". Hm. Totally no pun intended when I wrote that. :P The conclusion is less cool though. Three parts angst and one part fluff, or something. I'll be posting it sometime tomorrow.

[eumelia]

Fluff is good :)

Well, I think it's considered creepy because most Sci-Fi AI's have always been a little bit horrifying. In a good way! I cried when HAL died, and I always liked Data from ST:TNG.
But you know, the Borg, the Matrix, Jane from the Ender series (which I'm less than enamored with, though "Ender's Game" is good). But Jarvis is charming, because he's quirky and sarcastic and you know that Tony and He have a great relationship, regardless of fic. It's brilliant in the film.
So creepy, but in a good, believable, slightly unethical way... kinda like Tony :)

[veldeia]

Whaat, there's nothing creepy about Data! :D Nor about Jane, in my opinion (and it sucks how the Ender series gets worse as it progresses, blergh). Ah well, creepiness obviously is a matter of opinion, and of how you define "creepy" :) Anyway, we clearly agree on the most important point: AI characters are wonderful! :) <3

[ladylahatiel]

*waiting breathlessly for the last chapter* OMG, Tony, OMG...

[veldeia]

*calls the paramedics*? :P

Glad if this is entertaining, as melodramatic and traditional as it is :)

[deejay]

Ooooh. O.O

Thaw him out, pls. Kthxbye.

[veldeia]

Can't thaw what ain't really frozen! ^_~

(Thanks for commenting, that is. :)

[deejay]

Hot chocolate should be involved, yes.

And don't forget the tiny marshmallows. =P

[veldeia]

That's probably what they use in the next chapter! Hot choclate, IV. Standard treatment for severe hypothermia. Can't do the marshmallows that way, though, they'd get stuck somewhere :(

[agilebrit]

Gaaaaaaaaaaah. You're so MEAN for making us wait. *cries*

"It's all right, sir. You can go to sleep."

Oh, Jarvis. <3

[veldeia]

I'm not mean, I'm just busy (work on week-ends totally sucks). :(

And that just might be my personal favourite quote from this entire story. Yes, Jarvis = <3.