Fic: Computer Empathy

[veldeia]

All right, back to stuff that's closer to my usual style (whatever that is). A somewhat silly, sentimental thingy. Once again, huge thanks to btsxbeta for the nice nitpicking! :)

Computer Empathy
An Iron Man movieverse fanfic by Veldeia

Series: Follows the R-rated fic Third Wheel, Reinvented, but should make perfect sense even if you haven't read that.

Comments

[eumelia]

This was great!
I love that it/he/zie loves them both and that Pepper and Tony's reactions were quite different.
So sweet.
I'm looking foreward to more interaction between the three of them :D

[veldeia]

Whee, I've lost count how many first comments you've done on my fic. Cool. Thanks. :D

Sweet, cute & feel-good was what I was going for with this, so I'm glad it came through that way. :)

[ladylahatiel]

Your author's endnote nearly made me CRY. It CAN'T end like this! OMG, my Jarvis! I just want to crawl inside his CPU and hug as much of his new, exciting, Tony-Stark-Programming-Language-written code as I can possibly manage. *cries for him* It's gonna be okay, Jarvis...

...please write part III? Please please?

Please?

[veldeia]

Aww, please don't cry! See, Jarvis isn't crying anymore, either! We can go hug him/it together! :)

And well, hm, knowing my tendency to say "I don't think I can write it" and then go on and write it anyway, I'd say there's a pretty good chance that part III will magically emerge one day. :P

[tonpep1]

Poor Jarvis! He just wants to be loved. Come on, give Jarvis some love, lol. Really well done. You give a great voice to Jarvis and I have enjoyed all the stories you have written about him. (him?, see even I think he is alive)

[veldeia]

Him, it, whatever, I keep messing up the pronouns myself, too, all the time - I had trouble remembering to use "it" when I wrote this, since that was what I'd decided to use, but I kept writing "he" instead. :D Thanks for commenting, once again. :)

[blushing_crow]

First off, Loved the story! Especially Pepper's reactions to everything. That was great.

Second...I don't think the third story would have to be smutty...theres a lot to cover with Pepper, Tony, and Jarvis on the purely conversational level. Personally I would like to see that more than random physical smut.

Third, whatever you write, keep doing it! I definitely want to read more.

[veldeia]

First, thanks! :D

Second, well, yes, the third part would inevitably have lots of talk about all the questions this situation raises. The reason I think it'd have to be smutty is symmetry: part one of the "trilogy" was, after all, about Tony & Pepper having sex and Jarvis feeling lonely and left out. So, it'd feel sort-of more complete if the last part could somehow wrap that up.

And third, well, I'll keep writing, though I'm afraid part three won't be the next story I'll write, since right now, I've got ideas & inspiration for something else completely...

[zionangel]

This is great. :) It's so sad for poor Jarvis (and I can empathize a little too well with that, so I feel for him), but also very sweet. I lke that Pepper's the one who feels for Jarvis more, but Tony's the one who handles it better once he gets his head around it.

I'd love to see a part 3, if you're up for it, and it really doesn't have to be sex - although that would be very interesting.

[veldeia]

But it's not sad anymore, there's a happy end! ;) Glad you liked, and, well, yep, part III... *points to her previous comment replies* - Yes, it wouldn't need to have sex, and it wouldn't be all about sex, but I still think it'd be incomplete without. We'll see what I'll do about it. Hopefully something, one of these days. :)