Sasuke/Sakura ~ Omega

[vejibra]

Title: "Omega"
Author: vejibra
Betas: angel_puppeteer , florencia7  & misspinkpuppet 
Rating: M
Pairing: Sasuke/Sakura
Words: 454
Warnings: slight lime and angst.
Notes: This is my first time writing a fanfic in English. It is not my native language so please be nice :3. I'm making an effort to write :D Thanks for reading and thanks to my beloved betas that help me with this :D. Love you girls

Comments

[ivy_tsuta]

Cute~
I love the flow of writing. It's very fluent and makes a lot of sense. With the way their relationship is, I think this is very accurate.

[vejibra]

Thank you so much :D I'm glad that you liked it :D really :D thank you so much for comment about it :D

[ivy_tsuta]

Yes, don't worry about it. I just wish I could read Spanish so I could read the other stories here. :(
But, you have a lovely style, don't change. =D

[vejibra]

ToT I will try to translate more of the other stories in here :D I promise :D Thank you so much, really *big hugs*

[rinhail]

Perfect flow. :)

Excellent job!

[vejibra]

Thank you so much!!! *big hugs*

[anonymous]

muy lindo, es un amor tan lindo...te quedo perfecto , sigue asi :) sory...

[vejibra]

¡Gracias Sory! :D!

[indira14]

Hello vejibrachan~! I have to say this was such a smooth read - like the words completely flowed into one another, seamlessly. I'd love to join this community!

Edited to add: Oops, just figured out I can't join! But that's okay - I'll watch! ^_^

[vejibra]

Thank you so much! I'm very happy that you liked it!! :DDD.

Ps: Thank you so much for watch the community! ;______;

[fade_in2_dreams]

oh, this was beautiful <3 Like everyone said, lovely flow-but for me the ending was what made me love the piece^^ thanks much for sharing!~

[vejibra]

Thank you so much for your comment about my story! ;________; thank really *BIG HUGS!*