Fic: Chasing Ghosts

[veiledndarkness]

Title: Chasing Ghosts 3/?

Author: veiledndarkness

Rating: R

Pairing: Implied previous Bobby/Jack, Max/Jack

Summary: Not all those who wander are lost.

Disclaimer: Not mine, no harm intended, and no profit made

Crossover between Four Brothers/Max Payne

Part 1
Part 2

Comments

[seyyed]

*throws confetti*
That was wonderful! Just the right amount of tense and sweet.
Can't wait for more from these two!

[veiledndarkness]

Thanks :)

[anonymous]

Jack is so messed up poor thing and so was Bobby, made their relationship ten times harder. Max, though clearly a bit stunned at being bisexual, knows how to be in a loving, healthy relationship. Hopefully he can help heal Jack. And whether it ends with them together or healing Jack makes him strong enough to go back to take on Bobby and keep him (who to me is just his soulmate and true disastrous love) I'll be good.

[veiledndarkness]

Lol, I love your comments.

To me, Jack could see what Max didn't want to admit to. A guy like Max would have fooled around with a guy or two when he was young, in my theory. Then got married, doing what he felt was right.

Then along comes Jack, wreaking havoc in his currently miserable life, lol. I think Max does understand relationships. In canon, he was very much in love with his wife, was devastated by her death, and I didn't want to take away from that. I wanted it to be very clear that he loved her, still loves her even as his care and concern for Jack grows into something more.

[littlewitch34]

I just really liked the part where Jack said he wasn't a dainty little girl. Something about that really stuck out to me.

[veiledndarkness]

Thanks :) That's something that bugs me in male/male relationships portrayed in various fandoms. Just because he bottoms, doesn't make him the 'girl', y'know?

[littlewitch34]

Aw, come on. Jackie can be a little dainty sometimes ;)

[veiledndarkness]

Ok, sometimes :p