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Fic: Words Have Consequences

Mar 11, 2013 13:19

Title: Words Have Consequences
Series: Sleeps with Butterflies
Author: vegawriters
Fandom: CSI
Pairing: Grissom/Sara (angst)
Rating: PG-15. Some references to sex. Lots of language.
Timeframe: Just post Butterflied
A/N: This one is for elucreh and sand_mercury. Because they sat there with me and watched it while I cried. Thank you to kittyknighton for the beta.
Disclaimer: CSI ( Read more... )

sleeps with butterflies, gil grissom, sara sidle, csi

Comments 6

kittyknighton March 11 2013, 19:51:09 UTC

I love this fic and the concept of it, that they've been here before, for various reasons, more than once. Because we know they've been together and apart and together again... Getting to "see" it is tremendous. And I love it.

vegawriters March 11 2013, 19:53:58 UTC

Writing it, I really spent a lot of time in the post Forget Me Not world. It feels like that's where they are, again. And again. And they're going to keep orbiting each other and they may never completely work out their issues. But they're more than ships passing - they want to be together and they're willing to work on it. But they need time and space TO work on it.

thank you so much :)

anonymous March 13 2013, 06:28:58 UTC

this was great i love it

vegawriters March 13 2013, 18:57:28 UTC

Thank you! :D

elucreh March 16 2013, 18:13:47 UTC

I love the sense of circling that comes through here.

vegawriters March 16 2013, 18:16:16 UTC

Thank you. :)

I think for me, other than the fact that eventually yes, they do figure themselves out, I love the cycles they get stuck in. It's as realistic a relationship as TV ever shows. They push each other's buttons, they break each other's hearts ... and somewhere in there, they might figure it all out. Maybe.

Maybe. ;)