Rough Draft ch 1/Prolouge
A/N: Time to get cracking at this, though I imagine it will take a while... Ah well.
The city of Leobai was a large metropolis that was located in the Blue controlled portion of Zanzibar, a small planet that was located abysmally far from Earth. It was a mainly military city, much like the only other city located on the planet, Charestone, which was controlled by the Red forces. The planet had become a pit stop for both armies which had resulted in the two 'port' cities to crop up. Despite tensions between the two bases, the cities managed to thrive which gave the soldiers a place to take leave and unwind. With all the interest stores began to appear and housing districts as well. This allowed non army personel to move into these cities and families began to follow their loved ones to Zanzibar. ((Just basic idea, will pretty up later. Orz, too tired right now))
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- (Edit 4/13)
Notes: No, just absolutely no on the names for the cities. They will be hence forth called Red city and Blue Bay (because they've claimed the beach :D...). I'm going to go 'study' the characters more closely. I really want to nail their personalities just right. I'm also working on plotting the whole thing out before I start, so this might actually take longer than I was planning since I have to bassicly come up with the complete story now. I think I'll go with the basic Romance plot for this story with elements of the Adventure plot mixed in.
The lovers are thrown together.
The lovers are forced apart.
The lovers go against the odds to get back together.
+
Hero meets Villain.
They fight and the Villain wins.
The hero rises from his defeat to battle the Villain again, and wins the war.
=
???? (Umm, I'll work on that -_-; )
Premise: Love conquers all? (...I'll also work on that...)
In this story I guess Tex is the villain, not because I don't like her, but because she is willing to do anything to win and this would set her and the protagonist (who is really Crunchbite ^__^;; ) on opposite sides. The ally is Tucker, who will act as narrator and will somehow undoubtably be hurt by Tex, who is blinded by her quest to win? This is slightly confusing simply because Tucker picks up the sword which kind of thrusts Crunchbite out his main character position. I'll have to think on this more.
I kind of want to include some elements of Halo, since that is what RvB is based upon, but I have never played the games so I don't think this would be a good idea. I just wanted to include some little things (vague much), but I think I'll hold out on that idea.
I'm getting tired so I'll work more on this later, but next time I have to make sure to answer these questions for all the characters...
1. Who am I and what do I do?
2. What do I want?
3. What is the worst thing that could happen to me?
Sigh, this things going to be fucking epic even if I don't want it to be. The more characters you have, the longer the story will be. List of characters who will be actually involved and not just mentioned...
Tucker
Crunchbite
Tex
Church
Caboose
Grif
Simmons
Andy
Maybe characters that I haven't exactly figured out parts for:
York
Wash
Donut
Sheila
Sarge
Flowers
Doc
O'Malley
Lopez
I'm out for now, let's see what I come up with next time?
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- (Edited 4/14 only a few hours after the last time)
Here's also a character sheet that would be useful to fill out:
Character Sheet
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Name:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Designation: “I am a…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Positive Trait: “I’m liked because…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Negative Trait: “I’m disliked because…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ego flaw: “Makes me great yet could destroy me…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ambition: “I want…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Motive: “I’m doing this because…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Internal Conflict: “I am troubled by…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• External Conflict: “I am thwarted by…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Secret: “I don’t know or I am hiding…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ordeal/Reversal: “Last thing I ever want to happen…?”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Epiphany: “I will discover…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Bio:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Till next time!
The city of Leobai was a large metropolis that was located in the Blue controlled portion of Zanzibar, a small planet that was located abysmally far from Earth. It was a mainly military city, much like the only other city located on the planet, Charestone, which was controlled by the Red forces. The planet had become a pit stop for both armies which had resulted in the two 'port' cities to crop up. Despite tensions between the two bases, the cities managed to thrive which gave the soldiers a place to take leave and unwind. With all the interest stores began to appear and housing districts as well. This allowed non army personel to move into these cities and families began to follow their loved ones to Zanzibar. ((Just basic idea, will pretty up later. Orz, too tired right now))
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- (Edit 4/13)
Notes: No, just absolutely no on the names for the cities. They will be hence forth called Red city and Blue Bay (because they've claimed the beach :D...). I'm going to go 'study' the characters more closely. I really want to nail their personalities just right. I'm also working on plotting the whole thing out before I start, so this might actually take longer than I was planning since I have to bassicly come up with the complete story now. I think I'll go with the basic Romance plot for this story with elements of the Adventure plot mixed in.
The lovers are thrown together.
The lovers are forced apart.
The lovers go against the odds to get back together.
+
Hero meets Villain.
They fight and the Villain wins.
The hero rises from his defeat to battle the Villain again, and wins the war.
=
???? (Umm, I'll work on that -_-; )
Premise: Love conquers all? (...I'll also work on that...)
In this story I guess Tex is the villain, not because I don't like her, but because she is willing to do anything to win and this would set her and the protagonist (who is really Crunchbite ^__^;; ) on opposite sides. The ally is Tucker, who will act as narrator and will somehow undoubtably be hurt by Tex, who is blinded by her quest to win? This is slightly confusing simply because Tucker picks up the sword which kind of thrusts Crunchbite out his main character position. I'll have to think on this more.
I kind of want to include some elements of Halo, since that is what RvB is based upon, but I have never played the games so I don't think this would be a good idea. I just wanted to include some little things (vague much), but I think I'll hold out on that idea.
I'm getting tired so I'll work more on this later, but next time I have to make sure to answer these questions for all the characters...
1. Who am I and what do I do?
2. What do I want?
3. What is the worst thing that could happen to me?
Sigh, this things going to be fucking epic even if I don't want it to be. The more characters you have, the longer the story will be. List of characters who will be actually involved and not just mentioned...
Tucker
Crunchbite
Tex
Church
Caboose
Grif
Simmons
Andy
Maybe characters that I haven't exactly figured out parts for:
York
Wash
Donut
Sheila
Sarge
Flowers
Doc
O'Malley
Lopez
I'm out for now, let's see what I come up with next time?
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- (Edited 4/14 only a few hours after the last time)
Here's also a character sheet that would be useful to fill out:
Character Sheet
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Name:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Designation: “I am a…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Positive Trait: “I’m liked because…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Negative Trait: “I’m disliked because…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ego flaw: “Makes me great yet could destroy me…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ambition: “I want…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Motive: “I’m doing this because…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Internal Conflict: “I am troubled by…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• External Conflict: “I am thwarted by…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Secret: “I don’t know or I am hiding…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ordeal/Reversal: “Last thing I ever want to happen…?”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Epiphany: “I will discover…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Bio:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Till next time!