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Supernatural: Clangs (2/2) by Vehemently

Jul 20, 2007 13:30

Title: Clangs
By: Vehemently (vee_fic)
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: R for language, scariness, and adult themes
Spoilers: none.
Beta by minim_calibre and cofax7.
What is it: Gen AU. A homecoming. A horror.
Tagline: It was just a stupid accident. It doesn't have to be any more complicated than that.

Continued from Part 1

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minim_calibre July 20 2007, 19:27:23 UTC

Oh, well done!

This is just as it should be. Perfect.

vee_fic July 21 2007, 12:19:45 UTC

Thanks. Your advice was instrumental, as I hope you can tell.

minim_calibre July 21 2007, 22:48:48 UTC

Awesome! It was most of the way there when I read it, and it really is cool to see how it rounded out into shape.

apieceofcake July 20 2007, 19:54:17 UTC

Oh god that was disturbing, and sad makes me want to eat mounds of chocolate..LOL!

Nicely done, thanks :-)

vee_fic July 21 2007, 12:20:57 UTC

Thank you for reading! Good to hear it was effective.

arliss July 20 2007, 20:00:47 UTC

It is amazingly disturbing. The alternative to the rough and strange way John raised them. Not all white picket fences, Little League and puppies. Still ruined, each in their own hellish way, all three of them.

Beautifully done: both characters, though changed through circumstance, still true.

vee_fic July 21 2007, 12:22:26 UTC

The danger of writing such a fundamentally alternate universe is that it would be unrecognizable. I'm glad to hear that, although they're different people, they're close enough that you know them.

Thanks.

_swallow July 20 2007, 20:10:46 UTC

Aaaaaaah, goosebumps! This is so sad and intense.

vee_fic July 21 2007, 12:23:44 UTC

Sorry! Or, thank you? Anyway, I'm glad to hear it did what it was supposed to do.

innie_darling July 20 2007, 20:34:04 UTC

Oh, that was wonderful! I had such a knot in my stomach reading this, trying to figure out what had hurt Dean so badly. And Sam trying to stand up for himself while puzzling out what's wrong with his brother. And John, so faded and bland. All of this added up to something disturbing and wrong and a really well-done story.

vee_fic July 21 2007, 12:26:32 UTC

Thanks very much. I guess, yeah, it's a mystery as much as it is a drama: trying to make sense of data that doesn't, it turns out, make any sense at all.

I'm glad you soldiered through.