FF/SPN: Caieta Port

[vaznetti]

Another installment in this set of stories. This section has some adult stuff at the end.

Caieta Port
by Vanzetti
Adult, John/Zoe
Summary: I think this counts as the second date.

Comments

[iseult_variante]

Yay, more already! :) And, oh, man, I can see this all so clearly - the fight with the weasel-things (chupacabras?) especially - and mmm, smut. I am so happy that they're able to help each other out, in (ahem) various ways.

[vaznetti]

I think the weasel-things are just some kind of weird breeding project by the local Dr. Moreau. Next week, Chinese zombies! But I'm really glad that the fight scene worked, because it's hard to get an action scene onto paper. At least, I find it so.

And yes, they're good for each other. I like that.

[iseult_variante]

Action scenes ARE hard. I have to really visualize them before I can write them down, and then I can't tell whether I've written it clearly, because I can already see it. *facepalm* (... but I find I have the same issue writing sex - wait, where's his hand? ;) )

[vaznetti]

Oh, sex scenes. So my earliest writing and beta-reading experience was back in XF, writing Krycek, and if you think blocking sex scenes is hard anyway, try figuring out what a guy can and can't do with only one arm. I try to remember to count the number of arms and legs in any given scene, because every now and then you get some unusual results...

[iseult_variante]

Oh, dude, that would be difficult! I remember trying to block a sex scene where the two participants were handcuffed together each by one hand. That fic remains unfinished. ;)