Bleach Fic

Sep 16, 2008 13:27

Title: Beaten
Characters: Ishida
Rating: G
Warnings etc: none
Word Count: 299
Summary: Ishida is overwhelmed

Written for bleach_contest week 30 -- "onslaught"

undone by reputation )

writing, fiction, bleach

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ldybastet September 16 2008, 12:36:43 UTC
I love this so much! I just... love. :-)

(and freakily, I have the right icon for this comment!)

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vayshti September 16 2008, 12:42:01 UTC
Appropriate icon is definitely appropriate! Lol, I love that manly legs akimbo pose he's got going there.

I can so rarely do teh funniez, that when they strike I have to listen.

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k_undertoe September 20 2008, 18:37:27 UTC
Oh god! The icon XDDDD Wow, those hands could grope so fast...

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olympia_m September 16 2008, 12:42:46 UTC
awwww - so ... so... Ishida!!!!

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vayshti September 16 2008, 12:48:29 UTC
*waves* Hello there! :D

I have a very big soft spot for Ishida. I'm beginning to sound like a broken record wailing about his extended absence from the manga...

Thanks for delurking ;)

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*waves back* olympia_m September 16 2008, 13:01:43 UTC
heheee - I know what you mean!
he's absent in the anime too these months *deep sigh*

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misumaru September 16 2008, 13:12:42 UTC
XD XD XD Oh, poor Ishida - social skills aren't his strong point, are they?

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vayshti September 16 2008, 13:57:18 UTC
Every social encounter is a battle for Uryuu! Poor prickly pear that he is.

Except with Orihime... and Chad. Do not want.

And in my head, Renji, post current Arrancar battles

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misumaru September 16 2008, 14:18:10 UTC
Really? I thought he was quite awkward around Orihime, I seem to remember him flailing around a lot with her in the SS arc. Chad hardly ever says anything, so that's why there's no problem there...

Hah! Wouldn't that be more awkward, what with the UST floating around and all? XD

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vayshti September 16 2008, 14:27:33 UTC
IMO, he's awkward with Orihime and Renji *because* he doesn't treat his interactions with them as battles. It's a new experience for the poor sausage.

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fine_lights September 20 2008, 15:25:50 UTC
Yes, I was completely taken in by the dramatic set-up. *L* My favorite touch was the description of the burst blister on his poor, abused hands.

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vayshti September 20 2008, 23:56:08 UTC
Set up success! My work here is done :D.

I had a lot of fun writing the gruesomeness of the burst blister, so I'm glad that it worked well!

Ta for letting me know!

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aurorarose1414 September 21 2008, 19:03:11 UTC
That was very cute. It's so amusing that he could easily take on a hoard of hollow but a gaggle of girl is too much for him to deal with. *g* Very nice!

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vayshti September 22 2008, 12:18:44 UTC
I'm suddenly getting echoes of Clark Kent (from the movies, not that Smallville rubbish).

Dark hair, glasses - speshul uniform.... Kent was awful with the laydees in his everyday wear, but stick him in his costume, and his power was over 9000.

Oh, the crack cross-over possibilities!

Thanks for this flight of fancy ;D

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