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vanwaelda

Hearing is Believing - Part Two

Mar 03, 2006 12:06

For AN, see Part One

( Part Two )

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looking4tarzan March 3 2006, 13:06:42 UTC

ARGH dammit sooooooooo distracting (yeah presentation in an hour and SO not ready)

Major major whumpage...YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

and Lorne..bless

I saw "Porne" and died laughing......tho I'd rather have lorne for meself *evil cackle*

This was reaaaaaaaaaaaaaallly good soooooooo much tension

vanwaelda March 3 2006, 13:08:11 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! :D

Thank you :)

neery March 3 2006, 13:55:55 UTC

Wow, what an absolutely amazing story. The scene where John first finds out that he's in a coffing was incredibly creepy, and I hurt with them during the beating scenes.

And that scene where Rodney wakes up to find John sleeping with his head on Rodney's bed was wonderful and made me so happy.

I enjoyed reading this so much -thank you!

vanwaelda March 3 2006, 14:38:42 UTC

You're welcome! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Of course, it wasn't really a coffin, they were just messing with his head ;)

starrylizard March 3 2006, 14:43:29 UTC

Whoa! That's some major whumpage. I had to make sure they got out in the end. Coffin *shudders* My worst nightmare.
Well written and very intense. Very, very intense!

vanwaelda March 3 2006, 14:47:01 UTC

Thank you!

Intense is good, very good, I like that :D

Thanks again! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

2naonh3_cl2 March 3 2006, 14:48:40 UTC

omg i love this fic so hard. thank you so much for sharing it!

vanwaelda March 3 2006, 14:57:27 UTC

You're welcome! And thank you! :)

reginabellatrix March 3 2006, 15:20:37 UTC

This was a lovely story. Poor John, thinking Rodney's dead, and poor Rodney, stuck alone all that time and probably wondering if John got away.

Wonderfully intense -- you used the flashbacks very well. The little bit of Lorne/Parrish was nice, too.

vanwaelda March 3 2006, 15:24:45 UTC

Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it! :)