Engel Lied: Chapter I: Pie Night

[vankoss]

Well, i'm pretty new to this livejournal thingy. I would like to start sharing this castiel/dean story that ive been writing. Its mostly about castiel's humanization and the discovering of his feelings about Dean.

The Title of the story is an homage to Elfen Lied, i've thought of making an opening secuence also based on Klimt works, they're soo cool

Comments

[aescu]

An interesting start, hope you update soon :)

I'd like to suggest two things if you don't mind:

Your story might be easier to read if you use something like "" for speach and something else (like for exampe italic) for thoughts.

Put everything except the header with the story-infos behind a LiveJournal-cut so your journal stays neat and clear.

I'm going to shut up again and wait for an update :)

[vankoss]

Thankyou! y did had italic text when i was on word, but it seems that the format bamished.

I couldn't make the lj cut work, still working on it!!

[aescu]

I don't know if you know HTML but if you take a look at te code of your entry perhaps the reason for the cut not working is a
tag. As soo as there is a paragraph-tag the cut will be endet before the tag opens. Copying things from word is always a problem because word always attaches a lot of crap-tags to the text you try to copy. I've just looked at the source code of this page and found for example - that's word. And that's the reason the cut doesn't work :(