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vanillatte_x

[FANFIC] White Feathers [1/?]

Jul 28, 2010 15:38

White Feathers [1/?]

OnKey ; AU, Romance, Fantasy ; PG-13
♥ Key ended his life to start another one.
A/N : this is completely based on my weird imagination about life after death and stuff /grins. English isn’t my first language so please bear with mistakes and comments are highly appreciated ^^

( He just never thought would wake up as a soul. )

onkey, !fanfic

Comments 16

juphen July 28 2010, 09:22:23 UTC

spot!!!!

juphen July 28 2010, 09:39:11 UTC

soul city? white and...
plz continue...
i wonder what people / souls doing there?
and life after death esp for kibum

vanillatte_x July 30 2010, 10:01:20 UTC

ahaha i know it sounds pretty weird,somehow inspiring by anime: bleach xDD

thank uu for commenting! ^^

tofubi July 28 2010, 09:29:51 UTC

lol i felt like reading a Bleach+SHINee fancic

vanillatte_x July 30 2010, 10:04:41 UTC

lmao soul city right? Its not gonna be action or contain with hollow/shinigami though xD

thank uu for comment! ^^

undeadpetalz July 28 2010, 10:26:27 UTC

lol soul city, first thing that came in my mind soul society..bleach..hmm..yeah *clears throuth*
I liked the story, please keep updating :))

vanillatte_x July 30 2010, 10:08:25 UTC

lolol i know xD, n actually i write that soul society thing on key's reaction on the next part haha

thank uu for comment! ^^

mankadi July 28 2010, 17:37:49 UTC

omo :o
thisis pretty interesting :"DD
cant wait for more
and gosh`it was so sad thast key died :(
but now he meet jinki :))
<33~

vanillatte_x July 30 2010, 10:16:25 UTC

interesting? omg thank youu <33, i thought no one think that this fic is interesting since not many people want me to update lmao /sobs

yeah i dont want that cutie pie dead too,but he just have to die so he could live happily with jinki lol am i spoil the whole story? xDDD

thank uu for comment! ^^

mankadi July 30 2010, 13:13:28 UTC

Yes please update soon :"DD
i wanna read moree <3~
and keke` I LOVE SPOILERS *_____*
kkeke <33

rinni1905 July 29 2010, 02:52:30 UTC

Wah, do you still remember unnie? Baby, you should write the next part as soon as possible, because this fic is really good. After reading the first part, I can't wait for the second part. Promise me that you won't abandon this fic, or I will nag you till no end.

Jinki is so cute in this fic, aw, his gentle and somewhat silly nature make me want to embrace him tightly. I think he is attracted by Key already, and I hope their relationship will turn out to be well. Key is really adorable too, he keeps hitting Dubu and he can't even sit still for a moment. What a cute kid! Maybe because of that, Jinki like him already.

Omo, I can't guess what will happen next, so you should update soon. Baby, thanks for writing this. I'm so Onkey-deprived recently.

vanillatte_x July 30 2010, 10:26:41 UTC

aigoo unniee,of course i still remember u n i miss u unnieee haha <33
whoah how could u know that i'm attempt to abandon this fic? lmao /bricked
but since ure my lovely unnie who gave such a loveeely comment,i promise i'll update soon as i could /since my life is busy as hell xDD

i know unnie*sigh* too much ontae somehow breaks my heart