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[vanillanikki913]

READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Then comment and tell me what you think im hoping to win some money with it lol. And hopefully the recognition and attention of the mayer or someone who can stop all this crud

Comments

[run4fun_mel]

you did a very nice job with this essay. well crafted, and you did well relating it back to you. Way to work with a tought topic!
youre and amazing writer <3 mp

[vanillanikki913]

Thanx melissa! Ur awesome!!

[notshynemorz]

i truly enjoyed this nicole. very well done. way more then what i expected. =D I got a lil lost and confused in the middle...but the beginning and the ending are amazing!! I love how you wrote it out and just put it into context. Good job babe! XD!! I sure wish you the best of luck....and i have a feeling this one will go far.

[vanillanikki913]

What don't you get babe? I can explain something to you.

[notshynemorz]

i'll have to read it again and then tell you tomorrow ...i think i get it.....talk to you later about it tomorrow....

[vanillanikki913]

if ur name is shahzadi check your e-mail!

adi

[vanillanikki913]

my name is shahzadi and i did check my mail.
but i didnt get anything from you,
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME essay as you already know, i think you will defininetly get the $$$$$ and if it doesnt maybe you will have pointed out some needed concerns of santee to those who matter. the essay is very strong and regardless of the $ those who read will get a great impression and hopefully will start to pay attention to the more important aspects of santee/

Re: adi

[vanillanikki913]

I'm glad you like it. Your opinion really counts cuz we've talked about this for so long. Thanks so much sweety. I love you!!!

[bergsteiger89]

You have a way with writing like no one I know. I admire that.

[vanillanikki913]

Thanks adam. Hey we should talk tomorrow.....and I mean it this time. Sorry we haven't.

[bergsteiger89]

Okay, thank you. And I'll hold you to it ;)

[extraxsandos]

1) there's a contest on this?
2) i can write better....... you just have better structure and organization.... darn you gorgeous intelligent ap student! (take me shopping w/ your reward *wink*...we can get your ears pierced!)
3) i love you
4) but i want a movie theater.

[vanillanikki913]

hehe I love you.....and i would love to take you shopping but they'll only give me the 2500 once i show that im enroled in college. Youre right you are TOTALLY the better more gorgeous writer. mmmuuuaaahhh!

[extraxsandos]

noooo, you're more gorgeous!

[vanillanikki913]

noooooo, you are!!