I got a delightful comment for
"Finish" over at the Pit of Voles.
(This link is to the LJ posting.)
"This was very well done. The emotional growth in this story was fantastic, and your 'read' on the Comedian was dead on, IMHO. Chocolates and cookies for you!"
The warm fuzzies are nice. One, that they recognized my protagonist's "emotional growth", and two, that they think I caught the Comedian's voice. (God knows, I read/saw enough JDM interviews to have a good idea of where his Comedian was coming from.)
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