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hildigunnur December 10 2010, 22:50:11 UTC
:D I like being the cause of things like this fic. (Should have done a better beta job though. One run-on sentence there in the beginning of the third paragraph. Shame on me.)

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vanessawolfie December 10 2010, 22:54:22 UTC
Yeah, It's kind of long... I can't be bothered to fix it tonight but maybe tomorrow.

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brinimc December 30 2010, 20:13:02 UTC
My first George and Lee fic, WEEEEE! (Do I "wee" too much?) Anyway, that was cute and surprisingly angsty for a story about one of the twins. Poor Lee, that must hurt so much. And George is pretty popular so that answer must make him feel insecure. I like how he was tough enough to "trap" George though and wouldn't let George talk his way out of it like I bet George always tries to do with things.

I really like this line: "When George heard all that Lee said and all that he implied, he quickly looked up and into his eyes. He was really worried."
I think it shows that George is going to try and change because of his love for Lee. It's hopeful.

Mmmm, Lee's a tease! :D

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vanessawolfie December 30 2010, 20:44:07 UTC
You don't "wee" too much ... I find it really lovely.

It was kinda' angsty wasn't it? :S I was trying to get it across that Lee was so hurt by this.
Glad you liked it all ...

And Lee's a bit of tease here... but he won't leave George hanging. ;D

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