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Second Chances (Chapter 23)

Sep 09, 2011 19:36

Title: Second Chances
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: Main: YunJae; Secondary: JaeMin, HoMin
Rating: PG-13
Length: Chaptered
Summary: After Changmin's death, how are Jae and Yunho going to cope with their grief and their increasing attraction to each other?

The next morning, Jae awoke to the merry sound of birds chirping, the room illuminated by the ( Read more... )

charater death, homin, yunho, jaejoong, pg-13, second chances, chaptered, yunjae, romance, jaemin

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rainycakes September 9 2011, 23:42:57 UTC

SPOT! Bwahahaha!

vampiremadonna September 9 2011, 23:43:56 UTC

Omg, lurking pervert!

rainycakes September 10 2011, 14:14:17 UTC

Bahaha lurking my butt! You didn't put this under a cut...AGAIN. *arches eyebrow atchu*

Oh dude, I need to read this still :O LOLZ

vampiremadonna September 10 2011, 14:17:16 UTC

It IS cut. I posted it before I cut it just in case LJ was still pmsing like last time but you commented when I was cutting it.

rainycakes September 10 2011, 14:20:43 UTC

THEN I'M JUST SUPER FAST, YO. 8D

rainycakes September 10 2011, 15:16:31 UTC

Oh Yunho~ How perfect was he in this chapter?! He made up for his "shortcomings" in the previous chapters. *cough*LettingThatSlutManipulateHim*cough*

And Jae is just perfect. As always. *nods* How could he be anything but? He couldn't, of course~ :D

I'm gonna take a minute to whine and moan and groan about there not being anymore smut, ok? WHYYYYYYY OMG THERE WERE SO MANY PLACES YOU COULD'VE PUT SMUT IN EFFORTLESSLYYYYYYY OMG!!! THE SHOWER! NOTHING ELSE WAS GOING ON! THEY COULD'VE FUCKED IN THE SHOWERRRRRRR!!! WAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! AND YOU TOTALLY TEASED AND MADE IT WORSE BY MENTIONING THE SLIPPERINESS AND ERECTIONS AND OMGGGGGGGG *headdesk*

Ok, I think I'm done. That was for Sara, as well, just btw. Since she isn't able to comment properly yet, I'll go ahead and speak for her. *grins*

Therefore...Pervert 1 & 2, signing off! *wink*

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