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vampiremadonna

Forbidden: Part 12b

May 20, 2011 19:34

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 12(b)/13
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents ( Read more... )

yunho, jaejoong, pg-13, chaptered, yunjae, forbidden, completed, romance

Comments 16

yunho_ism May 20 2011, 23:35:39 UTC

spot!

yunho_ism May 21 2011, 12:49:55 UTC

wow. the queen sure is amazing. :O
and she's with child already. guess yunho and jae's sacrifices weren't in vain.
jihye's okay!!! so relieved somehow. at least jae's not truly alone anymore.
and i see you've posted the epilogue already. i'm off to read. :D

yunho1205 May 20 2011, 23:55:55 UTC

LOL!! Spot!! Again!! :)

yunho1205 May 21 2011, 06:35:42 UTC

Hehehehehe!! First of all, I loved your A/N!! "I want to wrap this up, you know, just in case we all die tomorrow and all. If it's already tomorrow where you live, don't get cocky! lol" Silly woman!! Katie has been freakin out all day because of those "end of the world" rumors!! :( My poor baby!

Ok! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! I can't believe you didn't tell me about JiHye!!! You sneaky little thing!! LOL!!! I'm glad you didn't!! But dammit!! You made me cry . . . AGAIN!! You really pulled one over on me!! The way everything fell into place was just perfect! Too bad that Yunho didn't have time to tell Jae the truth about JiHye, but I guess everything went how it was suposed to go, which was soooooooo exciting!

Well, I'm glad I didn't stop reading after that Yoo guy screamed that Jae was Yunho's lover I was literally covering my eyes after that part! I even minimized the darn page! LOL!!! I was so scared that the Queen wouldn't have an explaination for that, but she totally did!! Wow!! She was amazing in this chap let's ( ... )

rainycakes May 21 2011, 17:22:45 UTC

WOW!! YOU ARE SUCH A LITTLE DEVIL!! You sat there and probably laughed your ass off every time Sara or I were all sad because JiHye died!! Well idk, you DO tell Sara shit all the time. So not fair...but at least she was surprised with this! And I'm glad Jae has his sister back. Though he does have Yunho, he still would have felt very lonely not having anyone else in his life ( ... )

crimson_miharu May 21 2011, 01:00:54 UTC

SPOT!

crimson_miharu May 21 2011, 01:38:21 UTC

Ugh...don't you start with that world is ending tomorrow crap too lol! I had a teacher way back in high school that said the world would end in '97. He had charts, calculations! Well whaddya know 14 years later and we all still kickin -.-....

All I can say for this chapter is, ALL HAIL THE QUEEN! Who knew it was Minah....I had always for some reason in my head pictured the Queen as Boa >.<. Anyway I was so impressed with the way she handle this whole situation and basically played Lord Yoo for a royal JACKASS! MY wtf moment JiHye is alive...really didn't see that one coming...still can't wrap my mind around it LOL. So many plans behind the scenes YUnho really had everything under control when you think about it. His only monkey wrench in his plans which caused everything to be sped up despite it all working out is Jae's impulsiveness in killing Minister Lee (even though I approve of his actions cause it saved Yunho and accomplished what I wanted to happen from the start =D). Now all that's left to do is make sure the Queen gives ( ... )

vampiremadonna May 21 2011, 01:53:48 UTC

Ugh, not a BoA fan so it's unlikely she or her name will ever pop up in one of my fics >_>

Yay for JiHye living! I was wondering if anybody would suspect that I might bring her back from the dead. Glad you were genuinely surprised. I never really intended to kill her but temporarily getting rid of her worked to Yunho's advantage. Kinda.

crimson_miharu May 21 2011, 02:16:36 UTC

LOL! I'm not much of a fan of her's either but for some reason in my head the role fit her...but I like the choice of Minah *goes back to watching 49 days =D*

luvchoc21 May 21 2011, 04:04:59 UTC

hi!!i'm your new reader.truthfuly to tell,the first time i read ur work,the first thing that come to my mind,is that i feel like i'm reading a novel,so many drama,conflict yet beautifuly written.ur writing skill is awesome.i really love how u manipulate the plot both in forbidden and second chances(i realllyyy luv this to the core!).i hope u will continue to write this kind of heart-catching fics.

vampiremadonna May 21 2011, 07:17:17 UTC

Thank you!

chloe1910 May 21 2011, 05:10:15 UTC

The Queen is truly one magnificient woman. Yeah, too bad she's a girl or she would make a good heir for her Father's kingdom. I'm glad though that she's with child and she'll be less lonely from now on.

Though Yunho's love is Jae, I hope he'll treasure his friendship with the Queen and treat her really well. She's done so much for him and their kingdom.