Fic: Demons (Kimi, Fernando)

[vampirefever]

Here's a little something different - a serious Kimi, Fernando fic!!

Let me know if you think it works :-)

Comments

[zeraparker]

Kimi's study of Fernando was to see if he had his 'media face' on or if that had been left behind on the bed along with the mussy sheets.

He couldn't tell.

I loved these lines!
Great character study, works perfectly for me.

[vampirefever]

Thank you hon, that means a lot :-)

[kyokoaegis]

Awesome!! I loved the portray you gave of Alonso. He's not a driver I particularly love (except last sunday when he seemed to be the only one to believe in Kimi before the race started) but he's really interesting in that story!

Also thank you for the running scene ;) I had this beautiful image of Kimi running and sweating in my head and that was really enjoyable!

And now the end! My peverted mind can think of another way (much better than running if you ask me) to exorcise demons ;)

Maybe for a sequel?

Also, do you mind if I friend you? You write so many great stories, I wouldn't want to miss one!

[vampirefever]

When I was writing the running bit I was concentrating on what was going in Kimi's head, but now you've pointed out the visual image I can see it too *happy place*

I considered finishing the fic off with them getting together, but somehow that didn't fit with Kimi's mood - it wasn't that kind of piece really. I doubt I'll do a sequel - I rarely do unless there's a lot of inspiration *g*

Friend away - all welcome in casa VF :)

[vampirefever]

Thanks hon :-)

[kimothy_2]

"I was tossing and turning so much, by bed looked like a war zone." - that is my bed every morning lol!!

loved this, it was really good and that's sayin alot becoause i am so not a fernando fan :D

[vampirefever]

Hee!

Thank you. Slowly but surely I'll convert you to see the positive aspects of the lovely Nando :-)

[kimothy_2]

i don't know about that but if it involves more fics plz keep tryin :)