Ouch, you really did a number on him, and I love it!!!
This is so gorgeously angsty and whumpy... I loooooove it!!! Certainly fits with the N3- mood this week, what with the eps being cut down and now the fic with the destruction and angst... I know it was unintended, but still...
Anyways, I love Alan's pov and how he deals with things, especially with the guilt... I also love the snippet about Don's past with the broken fingers and that he does not complain a lot and forgives easily are all character traits that they never show but can be seen by watching the character, which you did...
Lol, your first line is fantastic. What's wrong with us that this is our first reaction to this type of fic? :D
N3 eps being cut down? What?!?! What have I missed? I've been kinda in NaNo land the past week.
Glad you liked Alan's pov. I was a little afraid I'd gone too much towards Alan's end of the spectrum here with little conscious!Don, but I figured that only served to increase the angst factor as he's so injured he's out of it.
This is so gorgeously angsty and whumpy... I loooooove it!!! Certainly fits with the N3- mood this week, what with the eps being cut down and now the fic with the destruction and angst... I know it was unintended, but still...
Anyways, I love Alan's pov and how he deals with things, especially with the guilt... I also love the snippet about Don's past with the broken fingers and that he does not complain a lot and forgives easily are all character traits that they never show but can be seen by watching the character, which you did...
Masterpiece- like stuff... :)
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N3 eps being cut down? What?!?! What have I missed? I've been kinda in NaNo land the past week.
Glad you liked Alan's pov. I was a little afraid I'd gone too much towards Alan's end of the spectrum here with little conscious!Don, but I figured that only served to increase the angst factor as he's so injured he's out of it.
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I sent you a link a couple of days ago, but with NaNo, I can understand if you missed it...
Here are a couple of links to catch you up :)
http://community.livejournal.com/numb3rs_notice/550728.html
http://community.livejournal.com/numb3rs_notice/552665.html
http://community.livejournal.com/r_morrow_daily/352961.html
http://community.livejournal.com/savecolby/459773.html
I'll write you an email tonight, sorry I've been out of touch, college is kicking my arse left, right and centre...
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