FIC: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 24/?
Title: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 24
Author: Valerie Vancollie (valeriev84 [at] hotmail.com)
Characters: Don, Charlie, Alan, David, Colby, Nikki, Billy Cooper
Rating: 15
Summary: There was a certain irony to the situation, that the brother who was a federal agent had been abducted to be used as leverage against the brother who was an applied ( Read more... )
*evil grin*
The delay in posting this chapter is due to a number of reasons and I'm sorry for it. You'll be happy to know, though, that I wrote a ton on the plane ride back home and will be sending the next chapter off to my betas tonight.
Don't ask me where Banner's ultimate fate came from, I'm not entirely sure. Nor do I really want to inspect it too closely, to be honest. It seems like Frazer's still alive and kicking in my head. While it is true that I knew Banner's death wouldn't be pretty, the evisceration thing blindsided me a little. It just popped out while writing this chapter.
As with the last chapter, I'd like to thank aleo_70 once more for her help with proper police procedure. I took that and used a little (though I hope not too much) creative license for this chapter.
Finally, just a quick note for those of you who've seen Hangman: I totally pictured Don's scar as being smaller than we have now seen it to be. Hence the reason that Frazer didn't notice it right away and why I thought it might match the size of a knife hilt more. My bad. I guess I forgot to take the surgery into account, that would have made it bigger. Well, either that or Radovic pulled upwards once he'd stabbed Don. *shudder*
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