FIC: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 16/?

[valeriev84]

Title: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 16
Author: Valerie Vancollie (valeriev84 [at] hotmail.com)
Characters: Don, Charlie, Alan, David, Colby, Nikki, (surprise)
Pairings: brief canon mentions of Charlie/Amita & Don/Robin
Rating: 15
Summary: There was a certain irony to the situation, that the brother who was a federal agent had been abducted to be

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[valeriev84]

Viola, the first chapter of Part V. This will be the longest part of the fic; it's currently 6 chapters and still growing!

As you can see, Don is slowly starting to figure things out and putting the pieces of the puzzle together. He's not completely there just yet, but he's got most of what he needs to figure things out. So do you, by the way
:D

Did anyone see the truth of Geek's situation coming?

Unfortunately we've now caught up with what I've managed to send to my betas. I'm hoping to get chapters 17-21 to them today or tomorrow, but they'll need a bit of time to look things over. However, since this coincides with a planned holiday of mine where I'll be away without internet access, it doesn't really affect the posting schedule as I wouldn't be able to post the next chapter on Friday anyway.

So, sorry, but it will be at least a week before the next chapter goes up.

[valeriev84]

:)

You're too good a guessing, but then, we're on the same wavelength, so that's not all that surprising.

Partially, there's a little more to it than just that.

Thanks. But don't worry, there will be something else of mine up before I go. A little birdie told me there's a special event coming up on Thursday.
*grins*

[valeriev84]

Lol

*hugs back then rushes off to finish*

:D

[loozy]

Mwuahahaha, I am not as stupid as I thought I was :D

Brilliant, just brilliant... Seriously, one of the best chapters yet simply because of how it is written...

You outdid yourself...

[valeriev84]

See, the clues are there, if you notice them.

Wow, a non-whump chapter?! Thanks!

[loozy]

It was all about his brain and psychology, and yeah... I am just very very much in love with this chapter... I might even leave the chapter with The Sentence for it...

But then again I am planning on marrying the whole fic, so there you go, everybody wins *snicker*

[valeriev84]

Okay, now I'm amazed, though this chapter did have The Sentence in it, just in Don's mind. But I'm glad, I was afraid this was gonna be seen as one of those necessary, but annoying, filler chapters.