FIC: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 13/?

[valeriev84]

Title: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 13
Author: Valerie Vancollie (valeriev84 [at] hotmail.com)
Characters: Don, Charlie, Alan, David, Colby, Nikki, (surprise)
Pairings: brief canon mentions of Charlie/Amita & Don/Robin
Rating: 15
Summary: There was a certain irony to the situation, that the brother who was a federal agent had been abducted to be

Comments

[loozy]

*crack*

My heart just broke.

That's all I can say really, because I'm just... Oh wow... Heartbroken...

Listenting to the soundtrack of The Chorus probably didn't help either :'(

[valeriev84]

Yes, it's sad for poor Alan here isn't it?

Unfortunately for him, it only going to get worse from here on out. Much worse...

And grr, you beat me to the first comment! See below if you want a hint as to what chapter 14 will cover.

[loozy]

Oh bugger, I didn't notice...

Shall I delete my comment?

[valeriev84]

Nope, don't worry about it. I should have posted it before letting you know it was up.

:)

Author's Comments

[valeriev84]

First off, sorry about the delay in posting this chapter. The next few should all come out on time as I've already gotten them back from my betas. I won't post them all back-to-back simply because then I'd catch up with the chapters that are still being written and the wait would be even longer, but they'll come out soon starting with chapter 14 on Tuesday.

I hope you all liked seeing Alan's pov on events, even if it did mean jumping straight back to Friday briefly.

Poor Alan, now it's his turn to feel guilty. Unfortunately for him, this is only just the beginning of the roller coaster ride.

In case you're curious about chapter 14, while the first part takes place on Wednesday evening, most of it is dedicated to the revelation scene that wasn't in chapter 12.

[valeriev84]

Oh no, I hope you get better quickly!