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valerienne

Then there was Light

Aug 25, 2005 15:31

Title: Then there was Light
Author: valerienne
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Dom/Elijah
Disclaimer: Far too much fun to be true.
Notes: Possibly a bit crack!fic-y. Written for the lotrpschallenge community #36 A Second in Time

( Dom had opened his mouth and taken it between his lips like he knew exactly what it was he was supposed to do. )

Comments 26

matildabj August 25 2005, 15:00:44 UTC

Ooh yes! I like, very much!

valerienne August 25 2005, 15:51:25 UTC

Thank you! So glad you didn't mind me pinching the idea back. I felt all greedy - like I'd offered a doughnut, and then eaten it myself :)

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valerienne August 25 2005, 15:53:36 UTC

*bows* I thank you - I'll be here all week... :)

light_the_sky76 August 25 2005, 15:11:50 UTC

Ha ha!

I was worried for a moment that you had gone to the scary Domlijah place :)

Very nice.

valerienne August 25 2005, 15:56:16 UTC

Well - it's not unheard of for me to write Domlijah, you know. And this may have its tongue stuck so firmly in its cheek that its poking my ear, but it's still Domlij at heart... *hangs head* I have failed you :)

light_the_sky76 August 25 2005, 17:12:25 UTC

Eek!

Well everyone has their eccentricities :)

valerienne August 26 2005, 08:01:55 UTC

Still Monaboyd at heart though, I promise!

feel_me_tremble August 25 2005, 15:28:12 UTC

*snickers*

I couldn't wait to get to the end to see what it was that Dom actually had stuck between his lips - knew it wouldn't be the obvious and was giggling and grinning with what it turned out to be.

Excellent - and wonderfully done!

valerienne August 25 2005, 15:59:42 UTC

Damn! *opens eyes wide* You mean you couldn't immediately tell it was a man smoking his first cigarette? Oh no!

Heh.

Thank you. *grin*

kissing_athelas August 25 2005, 19:20:57 UTC

Oh, I just ~love~ people who feed my smoking fetish. Thank you!

valerienne August 26 2005, 07:54:52 UTC

*confesses* I too do partake of the evil weed. But if the lads smoke, why shouldn't I? :)

(NB: Of course, I don't really mean this, there is irony here, smoking is bad and wrong and will kill me - I know, I know.)

kissing_athelas August 26 2005, 20:25:02 UTC

Yeeeah... but it looks so damn cool and sexy.