The Occam's razor job - Chapter 32 - b

[valawenel]

Title: The Occam's razor Job
Characters: Nate Ford, Eliot Spencer, Alec Hardison, Parker, Sophie Deveraux, Patrick Bonnano
Fandom: Leverage
Spoilers:  The Lonely Hearts Club Job, The Boy's night out Job
warnings: Dead people, language, violence, medical bullsh*t, extreme violence in later chapters, and extreme angst
Disclaimer: I do not own blah blah

Comments

[jesco0307]

Eliot and Nate bickering is so funny!!!

But oh, Eliot snapped his sunglasses, now that's not good...Your cost - benefit analysis needs serious reconsidering had me giggling here, I couldn't help it.

Yay, Hardison made up a fake medical record, awesome move. I was expecting him to intercept the transmission or something, but this is way better!!!

And again - Eliot and Nate communicating stuff right in front of Villacorta. *happy sigh*

Good that I read it again - last night I somehow didn't see that Eliot told Nate to clone his phone...

Eliot and Tapia - they are hilarious together. I think I need both of them to come out of this okay, please? And of course meeting again. ;)

LOL for Sophie - my IQ has been lowered? I just want to hug her right now...

I love to see that though he's breaking down, Eliot still has things to add to the play. I love that, love that he's not giving everything completely over to Nate, but working with Nate.

...they weren’t more than boring mosquitoes - OMG, the mosquitoes are back!! *giggles*

Damn, Eliot is still very dangerous. Not a good idea to underestimate him.

[valawenel]

In fact, when I collected all things that they could communicate before Villacorta, I had to throw more than half of it out, because the scene became too long. I had to take care of Hardison's counting minutes until Mexicans arrive, and only way to put everything in it would be prolonging their coming to 30 minutes... and that would ruin dramatics even more.

Eliot and Tapia - I'll see what I can do :D But I think that solving of it would be in the same tone as we spoke in our mails.

Yes, mosquitoes were funny... when he thought about them the first time in the hospital ( with that list he wrote), I knew how I'll use them here :D

[jesco0307]

You did a great job - it's enough details to get them both up to speed, but it's not getting too much to take out the suspense.