New White Collar Fic: Just About Ready to Cause a Scene

Apr 27, 2011 02:16

“Peter, I didn’t do this.” Neal sat tensely in the chair, arms held together like he was still handcuffed even though Peter had taken them off.

“I believe you.” Peter cast an eye suspiciously back at the two-sided mirror where the other FBI agents were. He’d asked for privacy out of professional courtesy, but he thought they were listening. They ( Read more... )

peter, white collar, neal

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rillalicious April 27 2011, 14:25:37 UTC
Thanks for sharing this! I love dialogue fic and you've done such a great job with it. I really like that Peter gets that while Neal isn't guilty of this particular crime, he's still pulled a lot of stunts that should have sent him back to jail, and that Peter is conflicted about that. You don't see that addressed very often and I think you did a fabulous job with it. And Elizabeth, of course, putting her own very IC perspective on things. Your Neal is lovely as well!

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vain_glorious April 27 2011, 14:41:13 UTC
Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

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elrhiarhodan April 27 2011, 15:47:55 UTC
I love this to bits...great dialogue, great interaction. I especially love how Peter avoided going to see Neal in prison until it was almost too late (and that Elizabeth gave him the push - via Neal's not so subtle message).

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vain_glorious April 27 2011, 16:05:48 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! :)

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rude02 April 27 2011, 20:21:31 UTC
I like this fic. It deals with Neal's options and choices as a criminal surrounded by feds, an easy target to both sides of the law... angst! If not for Peter...well. Was it Ruiz who set him up?

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vain_glorious April 27 2011, 20:27:47 UTC
I'm glad you liked. As for the perp...Neal has more than enough enemies, right?

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nefhiriel April 27 2011, 20:24:56 UTC
Aww, this is really sweet! Wonderful dialog between the two of them. ^^

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vain_glorious April 27 2011, 20:28:03 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! :)

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kriadydragon April 27 2011, 21:00:27 UTC
Very nice :D

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vain_glorious April 27 2011, 21:07:04 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! :)

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