Comments | vail_kagami: Before Sunset (2/?)

vail_kagami

Before Sunset (2/?)

Sep 18, 2007 04:53

Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: R
Pairing: AU!Master/Doctor (10)
Summary: Two Time Lords in serious need of therapy. Nearly a year after the first chapter the two of them are travelling the universe again, because the Doctor needs to remind himself of what he is fighting for. The Master plays the part of his nurse. With benefits.

( Right now he looked like he had before, happily munching his ice-cream, and despite knowing better the Master found himself thinking that maybe he would be feeling just as fine tomorrow. )

medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, # series: losing the lifeline, * story: before sunset

Comments 5

boulette_sud September 18 2007, 08:24:24 UTC

Ow ow ow, that's painful. But fantastic!

neek_love September 18 2007, 09:58:08 UTC

Just wonderful!
Bittersweet, caring and callous at the same time. Nicely done :)

'a quite and honest smile' should perhaps be 'a quiet and honest smile'? Or not...

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vail_kagami September 18 2007, 17:25:18 UTC

What would I do without nice people like you! Thanks for the feedback!

Planes would be good too, though.

I can see that: The Master as - what? The manager of an airport? A pilot for Lufthansa? The stewardess of doom? I can't help it, the idea makes me snicker.
This is screaming for crack!fic. Arg!

marah_sarie September 19 2007, 12:17:15 UTC

*anxiously awaits the next part*

What is it that I like so much about the idea of the Doctor, physically weak and broken, unable or unwilling to resist?

Tiny grammatical typo/thing: "The Doctor had know it would come to this but no!" That should be, "had known it would come to this".

amyross September 19 2007, 17:27:45 UTC

This is really good.

I agree that the Doctor's weakness is unsettling, but it sets the whole power dynamic up very nicely.

Was happy to see "tbc" at the end!