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vail_kagami

Because It Could

Sep 16, 2007 19:56

Rating: G
Prompt: #020 - Colorless
Claim: The Time War
Spoilers: None
Characters: The Doctor (9), Rose
Summary: At the End of his ninth life the Doctor has to decide.
Note: I hate it. It's horrible. I really, really didn't manage to find the right words. Arg!

The Doctor feels it when Jack comes back to life, the overwhelming sense of his presence ( Read more... )

medium: story, fandom: doctor who, table: time war, doctor who era: ninth doctor

Comments 4

skipthedemon September 16 2007, 20:20:43 UTC

OMG. I think I like this best out of anything I've read of yours.

vail_kagami September 17 2007, 01:04:57 UTC

Wow, that's quite surprising. Because I hate it. I wasn't even sure I should post it, it's so bad!
But I'm glad to you like it! Or at least like it better than anything else out of mine.

akeyoftime September 18 2007, 01:51:33 UTC

There's something a little awkward about the tone (it almost feels like you were just trying to bang it out, except maybe toward the end), but it's not bad either. Exploring the idea that Nine might have chosen to finally die to finally end the Time War - and that it can't be over until both Dalek and Time Lord are *all* gone - is new to me and quite interesting. Lovely tie-in to the episode, particularly in your last few lines. Nice and seamless!

rrr_nightingale August 12 2011, 17:05:16 UTC

It is SO amazing. You have managed to find really powerful words. And the idea of the time war going on while the Doctor lives is very impressive (and I believe he might feel this way).
Thank you for the pleasure once again! :)