Versus Time (2/3)

May 28, 2009 21:16

Title: Versus Time (2/3)
Beta: nightrider101
Rating: PG-13 (R overall)
Warnings: somewhat dark
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Doctor (10), OMCs
Summary: The Doctor being a brave hero with no sense of self-preservation leads to Jack having to save the universe all on his own. Or so it seems.
Note: Will have three chapters instead of the predicted two. Sorry about that.

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medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, * story: versus time

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nightrider101 May 28 2009, 20:28:52 UTC
Another fantastic update!

It's hard difficult to imagine Jack's less than upstanding past especially considering his associations with the Time Agency.

Even though you left us with one hell of a cliffhanger, I'm going to guess Jack is going to take their offer. The Doctor is not going to be amused. If they do manage to save him, I can't imagine he'd want to be saved by that.

As frustrated as I am with Jack, it's easy to take the moral high ground here. If I was presented with a situation where I could change time and really thought there would be no consequences, there's a lot of bad things I'd want to avoid. Hell, I can think of a thousand - Hurricane Katrina, any number of wars, etc.

You've woven an interesting plot with compelling 'bad guys' and moral dilemmas. I love it!

I'm looking forward to more!

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vail_kagami May 28 2009, 20:45:15 UTC
Thank you for your sweet words. And your help, of course.

If I was presented with a situation where I could change time and really thought there would be no consequences, there's a lot of bad things I'd want to avoid. Hell, I can think of a thousand - Hurricane Katrina, any number of wars, etc.
Of course, there'll always be the question of what we'll get in their place. Equivalent trade and all. (Though that is another story.)

Even though you left us with one hell of a cliffhanger, I'm going to guess Jack is going to take their offer.
You might be reight here. Or you might be wrong. [/helpfull]

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nightrider101 May 28 2009, 20:54:39 UTC
Apologizing for more than two chapters??

Never do that! Your fans are always happy to see more from you!

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nightrider101 May 28 2009, 21:11:20 UTC
This should tell you how I'm feeling right now. :D

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vail_kagami May 28 2009, 21:12:37 UTC
You got and icon for your urges?!
Pwah.

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nightrider101 May 28 2009, 21:13:47 UTC
*preens*

Isn't fantastic, isn't it? :D

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