Through the Ashes (1/?)

[vail_kagami]

Title: Through the Ashes (1/?)
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Comments

[xaritomene]

Mmm... I love the slight hinge of darkness to all this, the way this future of theirs is linked to the past that they've had together, and the faint implication that things are going to skew here in the present/future as well. And boy was that a curve-ball you threw us there at the end! ^_^

Can't wait to see where this goes!

[vail_kagami]

Me neither! No, actually I know. There's plot somewhere in this, waiting to emerge.
Thanks for the feedback!

[shinodabear]

I've so much love for this. There's such a wonderful atmosphere in it. Great ending, too. I will patiently be awaiting more. :)

[vail_kagami]

Continuing this will happen as soon as I finished the DW fic I'm writing, which has a deadline.
I'm glad you like it! I really enjoyed writing this, but wasn't really sure what others would think.

[laurapetri]

I'm intrigued. I like how you change from past to present.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you!

[archaeologist_d]

Very atmospheric and kind of creepy. I liked how Merlin came off as a bit of a stalker and yet Arthur let him into his life. How cool that Arthur addressed him in English the first time.

Well done so far.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! I wasn't sure what people would think of stalker!Merlin, so I'm glad you like him.

[andropovka]

I like this fic because it's really shows a realistic way of Merlin finding arthur again. :) The writing's really fluid and entertaining. And the reactions of Merlin.... oh Merlin. Is just so him. Great work! *hands you cookies*

[vail_kagami]

Thank you for reading! I really enjoyed writing this, especially since writing Merlin is so wonderfully easy.