A Quarter of Your Kingdom (Part 2)

Feb 23, 2009 17:27

Continued from here.

He was half through the door, a row of curses on his lips that would have made even Owen and Gwen blush, when he noticed that the lights were on the in the bathroom. Jack found the Doctor sitting on the cover of the toilet, picking at the stitches that held closed one particularly nasty gash in his arm. The door flew open so ( Read more... )

medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, medium: art, fandom: torchwood, community: tails_for_paws

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nightrider101 February 24 2009, 23:32:59 UTC
*sighs happily*

I must admit I had high hopes when I made offered this prompt, and you, as always, delivered even more than I expected.

Let me point out some of my favorite lines: “I am not going to undress in your…” The Doctor stopped, and turned to take a look around their fake tourist information centre. “People are actually falling for this?” he asked in obvious amazement.

Well said, Doctor! Seriously, the tourist office is about as bad as having Torchwood on the side of the SUV.

And my absolute favorite fluffy part that I know you wrote just for me: He took the Doctor’s hand when they walked down the road to where the TARDIS was waiting for them. Not because he was scared of losing him. Not because the Doctor looked exhausted and Jack wanted to support him.

Just because he could.

Perfect! Again, thank you so much! :D *mems*

ETA: One more thing I should have caught when I was doing the beta job: The last section of the story - half a minute late her hung up on a very agitated Owen

half a minute later he?

ETA Part 2: I freaking LOVE the title!! :D

Okay, really shutting up now...

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vail_kagami February 24 2009, 23:40:35 UTC
The title is good, isn't it? I'm very happy with the title!

And I corrected the typo, thanks.

You know I'm always happy to deliver stories for you!

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nightrider101 February 24 2009, 23:42:03 UTC
The title is fabulous!

And you more than delivered, as always! *clings to story*

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vail_kagami February 24 2009, 23:50:29 UTC
Careful! Don't strangle it!

I'm tired, but this time because I had to get up early, and will again tomorrow. Talking to friend on phone killed creative activities. Fail.
But the picture is making progress. I need a new fic to write, though. Ideas flee me.

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nightrider101 February 24 2009, 23:52:28 UTC
I know how you feel. I'm so effing exhausted I can't see straight. FAIL!

Hm...well, I can offer prompts if you're interested. Send me an email and tell me what kind of story you're in the mood for, and I'll try to offer inspiration.

In other news, is it Sunday yet? :D

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vail_kagami February 24 2009, 23:59:27 UTC
Not yet. But we're getting there.

We'll talk about potential stories on Sunday. Right now I'm too tired to think of much, and am off to bed. You should do the same.

I'd like a Merlin prompt, though. ;) For DW I know what to write.

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nightrider101 February 25 2009, 00:01:55 UTC
Off to bed with you!

I'm going to fall on the couch and watch a movie with the boyfriend. That shouldn't require much energy. All I have to do is stay awake. :P

Send me an email tomorrow when you're among the living and tell me what kind of prompt you're in the mood for.

Sleep well!

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