Comments | vail_kagami: ... Or Will Be Again

vail_kagami

... Or Will Be Again

Feb 22, 2009 17:57

Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #044 - Sun
Claim: The Time War
Table: Here
Spoilers: None
Characters: Fitz, Doctor (8, 9)
Summary: Fitz and the end of the time war.

The Doctor had refused to take him along. Fitz had expected that, and to be perfectly honest his friend hadn’t been going anywhere he’d been keen on following. The problem was, he didn’t want ( Read more... )

doctor who era: eighth doctor, medium: story, fandom: doctor who, table: time war, doctor who era: ninth doctor

Comments 14

edzel2 February 22 2009, 17:42:18 UTC

I really like this! You paint a sad and bleak picture and I would imagine that's how it was. Thanks for sharing!

vail_kagami February 22 2009, 17:53:56 UTC

You're welcome. Thanks for commenting!

nightrider101 February 22 2009, 19:18:23 UTC

I knew this was going to hurt!

It was tragic - the picture you painted was so very bleak. And seeing Nine! I hadn't expected that. He left Fitz. :(

All he could do now was hope that the universe at least would survive, and make this all worth it. A noble thought to go with. Fitz tried to actually mean it.

I love Fitz's thoughts when faced with his own death. It's pretty hard to be heroic when there's nothing to do.

Amazing addition to your table! This is another one of my favorites!

vail_kagami February 22 2009, 19:54:23 UTC

Thank you very much!
Fitz is always heroic while being absolutely not heroic at all. It makes him quite easy to write.

nightrider101 February 22 2009, 20:01:37 UTC

Well, you know I love me some heroes! :D

Off to take my nap before my shift of DOOM!! *facepalm*

Enjoy your evening!

vail_kagami February 22 2009, 20:07:52 UTC

Enjoy your night shift! Well, probably not. Still, do your best.

lithrael February 22 2009, 21:34:49 UTC

Gah! That was wonderful and sad. Excellent work. Also:

Maybe it had to do with their ego being so hard to satisfy that even the furniture had to acknowledge their presence.

QFT, rofl, heheheheh.

wishfulaces February 22 2009, 21:53:39 UTC

Oh yes, I can definitely see it happening like that, all of it, and poor Fitz knows enough to know that he probably doesn't want to know anymore. Yes, definitely can see it, painful as it is.

vail_kagami February 22 2009, 22:03:05 UTC

I'm so glad Fitz exists. He's tragically perfect for stories like this.
Also, your icon... is there something wrong with me that I instantly associate ciggarettes with Fitz?

wishfulaces February 22 2009, 22:32:16 UTC

He really, really is.

It's harder not to associate cigs with Fitz. Then again, that might be my own proclivities showing.

maypanic February 22 2009, 23:04:08 UTC

This is lovely, even being terribly painful.
All he could do now was hope that the universe at least would survive, and make this all worth it. A noble thought to go with. Fitz tried to actually mean it. That's very Fitz, right there.

vail_kagami February 22 2009, 23:07:41 UTC

Thank you very much!
Fitz is easy to write, probably because he is very easy to understand.