Comments | vail_kagami: Your World from Afar

vail_kagami

Your World from Afar

Feb 06, 2008 04:38

Rating: PG
Prompt: #005 - Outsides
Claim: The Time War
Table: Here
Spoilers: none
Characters/Pairings: onesided Martha/Doctor (10)
Summary: In 1969 Martha and the Doctor spend some time living together in a flat.

( She’s living with him, and for a moment each day, just before she opens the door, she allows herself to imagine that he is also living with her. )

medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, table: time war

Comments 9

huggabledog February 6 2008, 04:54:21 UTC

Yeah, lovely piece. I'm very fond of Martha and their relationship, as awkward as it is sometimes. I'd be Martha for sure. You really got the Doctor's little-boy-happy-bouncy side which I think is what makes him so damn adorable. So easy to overlook the rudeness because you know he doesn't even know he's doing it. I liked the image of Martha watching him sleeping too - yup, that'd be an image I'd savour too. In fact I'd grab a camera . Thanks.

eryaforsthye February 6 2008, 05:10:35 UTC

Oh!

This is completely beautiful.
Painful, yearning, poignant - your tone is so soft and gentle it just makes me want to cry.

Absolutely perfect. :)

*mems*

quazonic February 6 2008, 10:28:54 UTC

Oh, I like this 'slice of life' style. :) Love the image of the Doctor sleeping too. But aww, Martha! I really like how you've captured the Doctor's alien-ness (as you always do!) Love it. :D

persiflage_1 February 7 2008, 05:57:00 UTC

Poor Martha...

These lines:

He’s running counter-clockwise against the days. It’s futile but she lets him. Goes along and takes his hand so he doesn’t get lost.

are beautiful.

radiantbaby February 7 2008, 10:16:34 UTC

So beautiful and heartbreaking. *cuddles Martha*