SPN Fic: And this Great Blue World of Ours | Part 2, Chapter 11

[vail_kagami]

Title: And this Great Blue World of Ours (2.11)
Fandom: Supernatural
Beta: minviendha
Characters (overall): Dean, Castiel, Sam, plus a number of angels and demons
Rating (overall): NC-17
Warnings (overall): violence, torture, drug use, insanity, mentions of rape
Spoilers: Going AU during episode 5.18: Point of No Return. No spoilers for after season five.
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[sinka]

Would you think me crazy if I said the first thing I thought when I finished this chapter is that it was cute and sweet? I guess it's a reflection of how sad their life is and how my standards have shifted through the story because this is as close as we have ever seen the brothers in a domestic scenery and a safe environment that they can enjoy. At least it isn't cold and it has lots of food and books and the Sam and Dean can snuggle together everynight and give each other comfort! And there's almost-banter! what else can we ask for?

And well, that scene with Dean singing "Stairway to Heaven" to Sam to help him sleep was was perfection... It even brought tears to my eyes and I bet is the best night's rest that Sam has had in centuries. Now I wish Dean would do it more often. And also, I love that Castiel was lulled to sleep too. It shows trust and forgiveness like little else could. Dean sometimes feel jealous when Cas takes care of Dean, but I think Cas loves Dean better when he's taking care of Sam.

Oh, and I really really want to know what's writen in that diary. It creeps me out that Sam did it in sanscrit, not only because he's clearly doing it as a postume testament, which already breaks my heart, but also because how long has he been with Lucifer (and other angels) to pick it up? I wish Dean can read it before Sam does something stupid and self-sacrificing again.

Of course, all good things come to an end and I'm terribly scared about what's going to happen now. Where the hell is Jena? I don't think even Castiel knows, and without her they don't have any place to go in mind. They can't only wander through the desert and the city ruins, and neither Sam or Dean are in shape for that. And I can't helpf feeling there's somebody (something) closely following them!! Sigh... I'm too invested in this story and if any of them comes to harm I don't know... it's going to hurt like a bitch (it already does!)

Anyway, a really really beautiful, if still bittersweet, chapter. Is is the calm before the storm?

P.S: Really looking forward to that prequel from Castiel's POV!!!

[vail_kagami]

This is definitely the calm before the storm before the next clam before... Well. The end. Heh.
Your comments are what I'm gonna miss most when this is over!

I love writing domestic stuff. I also love reading and watching it, especially in the context of works that aren't terribly domestic. Someday, I want to have an entire episode of SPN just about the boys doing laundry and fighting over food and trying to embarass the other with the choice of tv program.

...

Aw, damn. I have a fly in my room, I hate that. /random

[sinka]

This has a very very easy solution. You simply never stop writing and I will never stop commenting. Just an idea: you give the boys a happy ending and then you keep writing their post-apocalyptic domestic laundry life for another 500,000 words. I would love to read that!! (no, seriously!!).

But yeah, I'm really scared for the next chapters (specially after your reply to my comment!) but I'm going to miss this story way too much. I love feeling so strongly about it and look forward to it sometimes more than the show!

Anyway, I tend to stalk you so you won't get rid of me that easily!