The beginning was great with the letters. It's a good way to explain the back story and get into Dean's mind. I'm kind of sorry, you didn't pull it all the way through the first chapter. I think you should have done either that or set the letters aside in their own chapter (maybe prologue?), because they are so powerful
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Hey! Thanks for all your comments! I don't know when I'll get around to replying to all of them, since I'm a bit short on time lately, but I'll just get started with this one
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