Comments | vail_kagami: SPN fic: thirty minutes

vail_kagami

SPN fic: thirty minutes

Jun 25, 2011 00:11

Title: thirty minutes
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Dean, OCs
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: torture, rape (non-graphic), death
Spoilers: season 6
Words: 1,167
Summary: There are still hunters out there who don't like Sam very much.

( Sam doesn't even know them. )

fandom: supernatural, medium: story

Comments 66

gidgetgal9 June 24 2011, 22:36:22 UTC

So dark and sad. I hate that there was no goodbye but very realistic of what could happen. The boys definitely walk the world on egg shells waiting for something to snap. You captured that well here.

vail_kagami June 24 2011, 22:38:32 UTC

Thank you!

de_nugis June 24 2011, 22:38:16 UTC

Ouch. Ouch. Ouch.

That was really good, but really painful. Please to be writing something uncharacteristically schmoopy with lots of comfort now.

I really like the stark way you interwove Dean's tragedy in reverse, and the way you hinted at Sam's hell memories making all the torture blend together.

vail_kagami June 24 2011, 22:44:18 UTC

Schmoop: My big bang is due for posting in two weeks. There'll be...
...precious little schmoop to be found there. Oops.

I'd write something schmoopy just for you, but right now I'm lacking time. I shouldn't even have written this. (But it wanted to be written.)

Anyway, thank you for reading!

phx69 June 24 2011, 22:56:38 UTC

Awk! Somehow I missed the character death warning.

Sniff. Sniff.

vail_kagami June 24 2011, 23:01:04 UTC

Aw, sorry about that. The warning is there, I promise!

phx69 June 24 2011, 23:36:38 UTC

I saw it after the fact :P My own fault. I was just so excited to see a new story. I did catch on when Dean drove his car off the cliff and then had to read on... :)

Very emotion invicting fic.

vail_kagami June 25 2011, 09:40:45 UTC

It was the kind of fic that jumped int my head and then had to be written immediately.
I'm happ you read on regardless!

minviendha June 24 2011, 23:04:11 UTC

So you know how much you kill me. Right? You know that? I hope you know that.

And um. If you don't, I'm just telling you now.

Is this some kind of terrible payback for the happy endings I'm not giving you? ...if so I LIKE IT. Adding this one to my memories and eventually my favorites list. I like the format.

vail_kagami June 25 2011, 09:52:49 UTC

Glad you liked it! And yeah, your mean, mean stories migth have been a source of inspiration because killing people with fic is neat, clean, and no one will ever spuspect the murder weapon.
But actually, this one popped into my head when I was terribly bored at work and I had to write it at once. Which I usually wouldn't. (Because, work and all, and my screen faces the open door. Well, it was a slow day.)

purplehrdwonder June 24 2011, 23:06:58 UTC

Um... *broken sob*

Torture from other hunters, Sam's hell memories, Dean not trying to bring Sam back and dying as well...It makes so much sense. And that's why it hurts so much D=

vail_kagami June 25 2011, 09:54:13 UTC

Sorry for hurting you!