I don't have an account with where you are posting but I just read all three chapters you have up so far and I'm very hooked. I'm a Sam girl so not having him in the story made it harder for me to read but it is a really really good story and I love your Dean and Cas. (I miss Bobby too though which is just part of this being in the future I know.) The end of three has me so shocked- I did not see that coming not at all OMG- I can't wait for more! :)
What a wonderful story you have here, i just read your four chapters and I'm totally hooked! You've characterized everyone just wonderfully (although i am sad that bobby won't be around).I did not expect those plot twists in the later chapters but i am so excited about about them! Great job and i can't wait for this to be continued!
Thank you very much! I'm really glad you like it! I will pst the next chapter in two weeks. That schedule gives me time to continue writing in between.
I can't comment on the chapter because I don't have a dreamwidth account, but omg so exciting! There's so many quesitons to be asked and answered. You've clearly put a lot of thought into this and I'm very eager to see where you end up. Keep going :D
I'm posting it at dreamwidth because the chapters are so long I'd have to split them on LJ. It's a little inconvinient, but I think it works. Commenting here is perfectly fine. I'm happy you commented at all!
This is amazingly complex and original. Every new little twist leaves me breathless.
Dean seeing Sam's body and not even knowing who he is is so sad. And the angels are all so spot-on in character. I almost do have sympathy for the devil.
Thank you! I think there might be a closer look on Michael and Lucifer later on. (I haven't actually written that yet.) I think Michael's actions need a bit more explanation than Cas can offer.
Hi! I couldn't comment on Dreamwidth, but I have to say something, so here is just as good. I absolutely love the world you've made with this 'verse. I don't think this possibility (of Dean says yes and Sam stays strong) is explored nearly enough. Castiel is perfect, Dean is perfect, and the Sam flashbacks are divine. Very much in anticipation for part two! Congrats on making me enjoy reading so many Sam-less chapters!
Oh, and the Castiel, Sam friendship brotherhood stuffs? So very much love I have for that.
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You've characterized everyone just wonderfully (although i am sad that bobby won't be around).I did not expect those plot twists in the later chapters but i am so excited about about them!
Great job and i can't wait for this to be continued!
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I will pst the next chapter in two weeks. That schedule gives me time to continue writing in between.
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I'm posting it at dreamwidth because the chapters are so long I'd have to split them on LJ. It's a little inconvinient, but I think it works. Commenting here is perfectly fine. I'm happy you commented at all!
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Dean seeing Sam's body and not even knowing who he is is so sad. And the angels are all so spot-on in character. I almost do have sympathy for the devil.
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I think there might be a closer look on Michael and Lucifer later on. (I haven't actually written that yet.) I think Michael's actions need a bit more explanation than Cas can offer.
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Oh, and the Castiel, Sam friendship brotherhood stuffs? So very much love I have for that.
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The next part already has more than 10,000 words, so I'm confident it'll be up in the no-too-far future.
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