Comments | vail_kagami: Before Sunset (6/?)

vail_kagami

Before Sunset (6/?)

Oct 02, 2007 04:07

Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: PG
Pairing: AU!Master/Doctor (10)
Summary: The Master and Jack are enjoying their trip, while the Doctor is enjoying his - until someone makes him an offer he very well can refuse, though maybe he shouldn't.
Note: Dedicated to very few people here and at Teaspoon who keep commenting and asking me to continue. Wouldn't do ( Read more... )

medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, # series: losing the lifeline, * story: before sunset

Comments 8

temporalgrace October 2 2007, 03:41:01 UTC

I don't know if I've ever commented before, which is really wrong as I read and enjoy all your stories. I'm always happy to see you've posted another chapter in this series. I love the Doctor/Master dynamic as you write it: it's so fucked up yet so true.

vail_kagami October 2 2007, 23:45:27 UTC

I don't know if I've ever commented before, which is really wrong as I read and enjoy all your stories.

I know you've commented at least once before. Thanks a lot!

pherber_m October 2 2007, 05:13:40 UTC

Ack! How's the Master going to get the Doctor back? On second thought, maybe he shouldn't... Poor Doctor.
And dear Jack - His libido wasn’t even pissed at Harry - Jack's libido is never pissed at anybody, is it?

Next bit, please!

ltsparkles October 2 2007, 17:01:23 UTC

I cannot wait for the next chapter <3 ^-^
You're my favorite fanfic author.
....and pie.

vail_kagami October 2 2007, 23:44:15 UTC

Thank you! This is the first time someone tells me I'm their favourite pie. :D

ltsparkles October 5 2007, 16:49:56 UTC

I'm glad to be your first ^_~

Not much competition, I'm not actually a big fan of pie. But if I was, you'd still be my favorite.

marah_sarie October 3 2007, 11:36:35 UTC

Oooh! Well, I, for one, am *loving* this story. I can't wait for the next instalment.
For some reason, this line really got to me: '“Sorry,” he rasped between breaths. He was making such a mess of his ship.' Probably because I can just see him, weak and injured and in pain, but still apologising to his poor TARDIS for getting sick on her. Poor Doctor...

One little tiny typo, hope you don't mind me pointing it out: '“No for this price,” he said.' Should that be "Not" there instead of "No"?

vail_kagami October 3 2007, 15:03:19 UTC

One little tiny typo, hope you don't mind me pointing it out: '“No for this price,” he said.' Should that be "Not" there instead of "No"?

Yes, it should. Thanks!