Merlin Fic: Through the Ashes (5/?)

[vail_kagami]

Title: Through the Ashes (5/?)
Author: vail_kagami
Beta: nightrider101
Rating: PG
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: It's been fortold that Arthur will return at a time when he is needed most. What Merlin needs most, right now, is for Arthur to remember who he is, and not to kill Merlin when he does.
Word count: 5324
Note: Well, better late than never... Damn, I'm sorry for

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[nightrider101]

You know how much love I have for this story but it needs to be repeated. EPIC WIN!

For all your talents, you really do humor well.

“John,” Martin hissed, actually hissed, looking like an avenging angel from above.

I can picture this so easily! Hissing! Is bad I find that hot in an odd sort of way?

This whole part owned my soul: . Reached out a hand to cup his face and the magic rushed back as if it had never left. Was aware of the other in a way no words in any language could express, and so he knew it was okay when he leaned in and pressed his lips to Arthur’s. He didn’t think, couldn’t think, but he knew it was okay. Knew Arthur was surprised and lost and not thinking either. After a moment he started to return the kiss, awkward and inexperienced and almost shy, and that was when Merlin’s brain functions returned and he pulled away.

I can't express how erotic the whole scene felt to me. I blame the return of Merlin's magic. I can see why he's freaked. I can really see by John is freaked.

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

[vail_kagami]

So glad you still like it!

Well, no new chapter in sight. Too bad. I wonder what could be done about that? :P